»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
Desire's Dance ... written with Michael G
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
Desire's Dance ... written with Michael G |
|
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Desire's Dance~ A silent brush of finger tips, that brings her near to me. She arches her body in response, allowing me to feel her needs. One look in his eyes ... takes me there, desire reflected in soft candle glow. His touch stirs deep within my soul, reawakening this ache ... rising up slow. Two fingers that caress, follow her supple chin. Her eyes light up the room, allowing my heart to begin. I long to know his gentle touch, to feel his body pressed to mine. Inhale his essence, breathe his scent ... this need for him ... my body will define. With a moments hush that fills us both, and hearts begin their dance. I wrap my soul around your love, to kiss your lips as candles glance. Now swept away in the moments pleasure, I surrender to your mouth's embrace. Baptized by the taste of your lips ... a sighs release as fingertips discover and trace. The hearts grace yearns in me, as I bring you into my passion. Our bodies begin to melt as one, For the release that we will fashion. Skin on skin ... breath on breast enticed and immersed by gifted mouth. As hearts engage ... bodies respond and reply, caress of hands and lips ... slowly headed south. The softness of your lower skin, the heat of moments touch. As lips slowly brush against, your passions burst with my mouth. Backs arch and shudder ... as desire's tingles dance up spines. Salvation found in surrender, as both hearts and bodies now entwine. Molding one into another, this moment of dance divine. As our rhythm begins in haste, but our love is pure and fine. Bodies move in perfect unison, hearts pounding with passions thrust. Instincts born of sheer desire, fanning the flames of both love and lust. That which we touch and then caress, kissing so deeply our worlds explode. For the taste of passion that lovers have, is ours this night with you in my arms. Bodies react to one another's passion, as desire's gift of ecstasy surges and then slows. Skin glistens in lingering candle light ... as two become one ... embraced in contented afterglow. Michael G & Janet Marie thank you my partner and poet of heart... for once again inspiring me. Also for indulging me in this effort... you know how I adore the sensual depth you write with. You do it so very well  [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-21-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
S U P E R B E N S U D U E T A E L O V E L Y I E N G A G I N G H R T A J F N A U D A N C E L E T E A M S I C W I T H A E L and my regards added too... sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-21-2000).] |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
having a cig, now...see what ya'll did? Grin...and JM,,,that's gotta be yer line about heading south...sleepy winky wink to ya...what a way to restart my day...hmmm...sounds like more good advice from me forum friends...think I'll go ponder on that one awhile...hugs to you both...grrreat poem...sizzling in my sleep... |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
WOW Janet and Michael...my screen is melting...this just sizzles...great write you two...now wheres my fella |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey you guys....get a room!! Naw just kidding, this is definitely a sizzler though. Whew! what a trip....I got my girlfriend to read it and after the first two verses she ran out the door and drove off to work...she got scared...then she left me here all alone to deal with this intimate passionate poem.. well now!!...I'm off the florist to buy some roses.....opps! got to leave the towell behind. |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
WOW!!!!!! This is incerdibly sensaul and sexy. I love it!!!! You guys write very well together. I think you should do more. Your styles compliment one another perfectly. Appause!!!!!!  Wonderful writing from two of my favourite poet!!!!  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As hearts engage ... bodies respond and reply, caress of hands and lips ... slowly headed south. As lips slowly brush against, your passions burst with my mouth. Headed south??????? Passions bursting in mouth????????.......jjeeeeezzzzz you two........what ever do you mean.....gawd!!!!!! You two have a license for this stuff???? This is so  I may just have to book a trip up north to cool my jets.....gee wilikers ....oh crimeney....!!!!!Beautiful piece you guys.....I agree...your forms match one another perfectly. I mean poetic forms not body forms.LOL..  |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
When you come north Mark I'll take you fishing that always has such a calming effect . The way you're acting I may have to throw you in a couple of times but that's just part of the therapy. |
||
|
Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
Thank you for the gift you've given us. Reminds me of a poem I wrote a friend, hopefully she'll let me post it. Though it is not sensual as this is. It is one poem written by two hearts. |
||
|
LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
err, JM? Yanno, this poem could melt delicate equipment around here! You oughta post warnings when you are putting on a fireworks show! Superb erotica. |
||
|
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jan the memories came flooding back, waiting for the e-mails with the pieces of verse, adding lines, talking poetically, but I understand you have to write with other poets. Michael you are a lucky man. Jan do you think that there is a chance that we could get back together maybe make poetry together it could be just like old times, I believe it can. Wonderful poem guys, Jan & Michael, I am giving this one a standing ovation very hot. Lady Eve may I have the next poem? "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
MEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! Oh this was intense...I was melting before you finished the first kiss!!! You two are meant to write together.....a melding of forms....poetry forms..yes that's what I meant.....geessh what were you thinking |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that I have cooled off some.....oooooppppsssss...darn it....happened again.,,.....ethome......coming back for another drenching...lol....jeeezzzzzz and I thought I was going to be ok this time... |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Please forgive how long it took me to come back and say thank you for these DELIGHTFUL and WONDERFUL replies... My time is not my own of late ... you guys had me laughing so hard... Im so glad you enjoyed... I know I did ... Mark and Ethome...if you keep coming back to read ... your gonna go blind   LOLand SEN...you know me too well now... yep...headed south ... to visit YOU OF COURSE.. what ELSE did ya think I meant ... C'mon---GET IT OUT OF THE GUTTER!!!!! LOL Bri-gator...always remember...you were my first .. THANKS TO ALL Who replied ... you guys make my heart smile.. love ya ...MUCHLY jm |
||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Extremely sensual work you two! Wow! You guys have to write more together, your words fit perfectly. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
||
|
AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very passionate , sensual and I can see it's your work all over. simply charming... If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
||
|
Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I have to totally agree with all said. I think mark B says it best. LOL You guys are the same and you write so beautifully together. I am in awe of how you both write seperatly as well as together. I must say this was a scorcher....OUCH!! Great writing. Jenn E |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If you write a poem about doing it is that the same as doing it...ha..ha..seems like almost as much fun...James |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
