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Caught up in your beauty
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Caught up in your beauty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Caught up in your beauty Excuse me... if I didn't seem that responsive to your last comment for I was just caught up in your beauty. Although we barely know each other I'm already crazy about your smile and if you don't mind too much I'd like to check you out for awhile. Because I'm sure looking to see what you've been showing me. And now I think I've identified what my favorite parts would be and the truth is I'm caught up in your beauty and I like everything I see. Surely it's no accident that you have long black silky hair and your gentle personality really makes me think you care. I appreciate... the sensual way you brighten my day. Seems while I'm caught up in your beauty all my worries and heartaches go away. So here I go again staring right at you and look now you've caught me but what else can I do? For it is almost impossible to hide the admiration I have for this woman by my side and as my fascination comes into play "Hey...I'm caught up in your beauty what else can I say"... Jameslee@August23,2000 ToMinaLeefromJamesLee [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tremendous stuff... caught up in the beauty of this poem... what else can I say...  enjoyed this muchly... regards James, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought this was lovely and huggably sweet. and oh yes, I know that affect...mmm. mmm. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a subject you rarely talk about James, I mean someone's physical self. You have always expressed someone's inner self more. This is a a delightful change.....after all, if there is no phyisical attraction then it is unlikely there will be a relationship. Speaking of which.....I noticed the last name????? Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was very very sweet ~H |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...I like the idea of having HIM so caught up in me that he didnt hear what I said...nice very nice |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehe I'm with Paula on this one! And that better be the ONLY time he's not listening to what I say! ROFLMAO This was sweetly romantic. Nothing nicer than just being in awe at what you see in someone.....*sigh* There are men out there who have that effect on me too! Just looking at them leaves me breathless....  |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
This was a really sweet poem! yummmmmm!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir, serinity, Marina, X Angel, Paula, Femme, and English for the warm responses... Yes Marina what you see on the outside sparks an interest to see the inside. I had just told her my full name and she told me her last name was Lee also and at first I thought she was teasing...but she wasn't. However, she just completed a divorce and perhaps she will resume her maiden name...her call... Paula yes I was caught up...she was beside me looking straight ahead and I was turned towards her and found myself staring at her hair and the features of her face and totally fascinated by her beauty..captivated I believe and suddenly she turned towards me and said something and it took awhile to break my concentration...I absolutely didn't understand one word she said. Yes Femme I was feeling exactly the same way...and it is a lovely place...to admire someones beauty...James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very nice, James...to lose oneself in another for a moment (or more) can be a lovely preoccupation. I admire your honesty. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I know all to well that feeling of being lost in one's beauty. This was so very sweet and honest. Very nice. Jenn E |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww, you romantic guy! *grinning from ear to ear* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi James, I am so glad to hear and feel your sweet wonderful emotions through this poem, and this kind of feeling you have stays with you for a while ha, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
jmlee, The first thing that came to mind was .. awww .. soo sweet  .rp25 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Claire, Jenn, passing, Cerenity, and rose for your wonderful comments. I haven't given this poem to Mina yet...we were talking tonight on the phone and I described how I was caught up in the moment and she laughed and ask me if she was beautiful and I told her yes...yes.. She remembered that moment when she turned to me...I told her how I was admiring her hair and her nose and her lips and everything about her...she was happy...hopefully I'll see her on Tuesday...James |
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