Open Poetry #9 |
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Calligraphy of Goldilocks |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Calligraphy of Goldilocks Calligraphy writes goldilocks Within the door of paradox. Musing through an inward trail Tasting porridge touching braille. Picking through pandoras box Each of vernals equinox. Flopping in a bed of bare. Reticent of who will care. Resting in a Lazarus dream Neglecting forces living theme. Illusions in tired light. Dim the dangers of the night. Tranquilized in new found lot And sleeping when sleep should not Using, taking, freedoms ride Thinking pleasures of the hide. Opens the door by egos boast, Without the knowledge of the host. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
[[JnR closes webster's deluxe dictionary]] ..Now..what a cool piece you have here..a nice rendition for an all time classic indeed..i enjoyed this muchly ![]() i would have liked to see how this finished lol, just wondering if you would add a twist or not lol ![]() < !signature--> "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me [This message has been edited by JnR4eva (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JnR4eva, Sorry about the dictionary. Glad you recognized some of the vageries connected to the original story. Thanks for the read and comment. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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