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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-08-23 10:52 PM


Calligraphy of Goldilocks

Calligraphy writes goldilocks
Within the door of paradox.
Musing through an inward trail
Tasting porridge touching braille.

Picking through pandoras box
Each of vernals equinox.
Flopping in a bed of bare.
Reticent of who will care.

Resting in a Lazarus dream
Neglecting forces living theme.
Illusions in tired light.
Dim the dangers of the night.

Tranquilized in new found lot
And sleeping when sleep should not
Using, taking, freedoms ride
Thinking pleasures of the hide.

Opens the door by egos boast,
Without the knowledge of the host.


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JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
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1 posted 2000-08-24 12:58 PM


[[JnR closes webster's deluxe dictionary]]  ..Now..what a cool piece you have here..a nice rendition for an all time classic indeed..i enjoyed this muchly  

i would have liked to see how this finished lol, just wondering if you would add a twist or not lol  
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"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me




[This message has been edited by JnR4eva (edited 08-24-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2000-08-24 08:53 AM


JnR4eva,
Sorry about the dictionary. Glad you recognized some of the vageries connected to the original story. Thanks for the read and comment.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 08-24-2000).]

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