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Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee

0 posted 2000-08-23 10:04 PM


Stealing God's great light
Casting darkness over all
Darn this cloudy day

© Copyright 2000 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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state of confusion
1 posted 2000-08-23 10:16 PM


Saying a lot with few words - as though the devil commandeered the day!

Corinne

Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-08-23 11:37 PM


The sun hides itself
with fleecy clouds of whiteness
We love it's return



JnR4eva
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Bronx, NY
3 posted 2000-08-24 12:27 PM


like someone has already said...you have said so much, and created an image so strong, wthin a few simple lines...great job  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-08-24 12:56 PM


TennesseeAngel~
Very, very nicely done.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Auguste
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By the sea
5 posted 2000-08-24 01:25 AM


Tennessee Angel,

What I wouldn't give for some of those clouds right now, especially if they produced some much needed rain.  Well done, my friend.

Michael





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