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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Stealing God's great light Casting darkness over all Darn this cloudy day |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Saying a lot with few words - as though the devil commandeered the day! Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The sun hides itself with fleecy clouds of whiteness We love it's return |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
like someone has already said...you have said so much, and created an image so strong, wthin a few simple lines...great job  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Very, very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Tennessee Angel, What I wouldn't give for some of those clouds right now, especially if they produced some much needed rain. Well done, my friend. Michael |
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