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My View of His Pain
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My View of His Pain |
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American Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-21
Posts 49USA |
My View of His Pain by American Princess He walks and strolls and flirts On this you can depend He doesn't show the hurt He knows the legs won't mend He doesn't like the chair He'd rather use the cane Not that anyone would care But it helps to keep him sane It hurts to watch the struggle Between his dignity and the pain I wish I could help him somehow And help the hurt to wane All I can do is stand and watch As he struggles with his plight And maybe give some encouragement As he continues with the fight |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This sounds like you are writing about one of our beloved members. Please check your email for a special message!  |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Sounds like we know of a micheal auguste! LOL  WELCOME TO PASSIONS  . this piece is a nice complament to his poem....would love to read more from you "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great first post here!! Wonderful writing. Welcome to the passions family!! Looking forward to more! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Welcome home away from home. Excellent first post and longing for more. What a sensitive picture you have painted. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions! The one you speak of in this poem is someone to be admired and I see in your words that you do...beautiful writing~ |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
Wonderful Show of emotions and feelings, Hope everything turns out well. Diane Yvonne |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
welcome to passions... lovely poem...keep them coming in and be sure that someone is reading If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Hi Princess! Great post my friend......it is hard to stand by and watch people struggle I know, but sometimes that is the right thing to do! Looking forward to more from you.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
To encourage someone is a valuable gift...James |
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American Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-21
Posts 49USA |
Thank you all for your nice comments and encouragement. I don't write often but every once in awhile you will see me! American Princess |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such a heartfelt poem. Even though he is extremely independent (read as: stubborn ) I'm sure that you are helping him, just by being so supportive. My best to you both. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi American Princess, Wonderful first post so much enjoyed, hope to see more of your work real soon, and welcome to our passions family its really a wonderful place. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very good poem, one of so much frustration . It is hard when your use to doing things on your own and then all the sudden having to depend on someone or something to get you there. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful and very heartfelt. Welcome to Passions and I do so hope you stick around. |
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