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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 2000-08-23 07:07 PM


Time has come,
Time has come,
Time has come for me
To give my heart away to you,
You're the person
I always dreamn't of being with you,
You always take my hand
And let me know
How much you love me so,
So time has come for me
To let you know,
I'm ready to give my heart away,
Time has com to give my love to you,
Time has come
To let you know
How much I really love you,
Time has come to let you know....
      

    I thank all ,my friends you've supported me in writting poems.Thank you,my passions friends.I've changed the words of this poem because this's my 500th poem to celebrate with it.Thank you for letting me to continue to write poems for you all and for you all to read.Now,I've got new job,I'm busy.I don't have time to write.But I won't stop writing and read your poems too.Once again,Thank you.

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-23 07:42 PM


Very nice, and congratulations on the milestone. Hope you keep posting!
catalinamoon

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-08-23 09:48 PM


Giving one's heart away...what a poignant thought, those few words placed together that way. Lovely, and very.

Congratulations on WOW!! Five Hundred Poems!!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-08-23 11:38 PM


Congratulations Vandana...
I have always enjoyed your poetry.
Good luck in your new job.

JnR4eva
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
4 posted 2000-08-24 12:41 PM


WOW 500????
CONGRATULATIONS  .
on this sweet poem and for hitting the big 5-0-0  


"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-08-24 01:17 AM


well done!
and a sweet poem for the great time too
see you around

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
6 posted 2000-08-24 05:05 AM


vandana,
it has been our (at least mine) pleasure to read all your poetic works... one of the few ever-romantics here, and all written with delicate thoughts of love and with tenderness...

Congratulations on the milestone...

btw- wonderful poem, this one...

regards,
sudhir

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-08-24 06:51 AM


It is a precious moment in time when two lovers find each other with the same desires, wants, and needs...
And now it is time to say congratulations on 500 big ones...James

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
8 posted 2000-08-26 02:20 AM


vandana, your work has always echoed my own. . . you've always supported my work, as I support yours. . . always from your heart my friend. . . just like this. . .

Congratulations!!!  And good luck to you!!!



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

9 posted 2000-08-26 06:05 AM


This is very lovely, Vandana...congratulations on 500! Good luck in your new job, also!  

Denise

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