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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Last Moments He had her on his mind when it became his time he did not see the tree doing 103 the still quiet grass, is now part of her past She stops by in the middle of the night to that spot by the tree where he lost his life no one sees the tears that fall no one hears when she calls Memories in time are what she holds dear though in her heart he will always be near she places a cross by that now old tree ... One day soon, together we'll be BloomingRose [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
what i enjoyed the most of this poem was the simplicity of this poem and the raw emotions that i felt as i read this poem. beautifully done bloomingrose  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I can feel your pain here. A loving tribute, a very nice poem as well. catalinamoon |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
JnR4eva Thanks. Not far from my home in a curve I witnessed this scene. To this day late at night a car visits this spot. I hear it was her fiance on his way to visit her. Although it was not me, I can feel her pain. catalinamoon Thank you... its sad but I am glad you took the time to read it. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah so touching a poem this is... very heartfelt... regards, sudhir |
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