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Reason To Believe...written in harmony with Jeff Carter
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Reason To Believe...written in harmony with Jeff Carter |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Without reservation I come to you And give you all my love My heart is in my hands ...my only offering All that I am, I am because of you I once thought that love was only a dream Before you gave me a reason to believe Now I know that everything that has passed Happened to make my heart ready for you Such sweet and honest devotion could only exist Between two too often broken hearts Hearts that have cried too many lonely tears And walked down too many lonely roads But this road led to you and the new love that we share And it made all the times of empty tears worth crying Just for the look of love shining in your eyes And the feeling you have given me to share with the world. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This is powerfully truthful and honest. Beautiful work!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Paula and Jeffrey... You have coupled together in poetic harmony and done it yet again.... great work... how romantic... I once thought that love was only a dream Before you gave me a reason to believe My regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula and Jeff..... What a beautiful piece of writing this is.......tender and sincere. You have both given us a bit of joy to carry with us this day!! Thank you for sharing this....< !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Wonderful poem you two. Come to think of it, i'm kinda glad that duets only come out but so often, for these would surely dominate the first few pages of passions  .wonderful piece once again  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
once again you two find poetic harmony ... simply perfect guys... romantic and intense... later-melody-gators jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ladysixstring...the truth is always a powerful thing...thank you Sudhir...Jeff is an exceptional partner...taking me to new heights in our writing...thank you Sunny1...thank you...But the credit all goes to Jeff, he is such a talented writer and it is an honor to partner him. JnR4eva...I dont think there would be all that many duets...finding a partner isnt easy...Im just happy our styles compliment each other. JM...as always its an honor to have you visit...we appreciate you and your comments |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So romantic and speaks so much truth. Beautiful write you two. I love all this "duet" writing goin on in here! Jenn E |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Hand in hand and heart to heart, They began with a pen for a beautiful start. But the way it ended, oh so clear, Two broken hearts now very near! Very well penned by the two of you. Well done. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jenn E...thank you...yes arent the duets just MMMMMMMMMMMMMm. oh2beme...thank you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jeff...I have neglected to thank the one person who made this poem possible...YOU...thanks again for being my partner in crime...hehe |
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