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Thoughts Escaping in Clouds of Mind
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Thoughts Escaping in Clouds of Mind |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Thoughts Escaping in Clouds of Mind Softly swinging on wicker strength In clouds, my eyes, are lifted to Leaning back on pillow thoughts My mind begins to think of you. Soft your lips, caress each kiss As eyes, each closed, then opened to The smile inside that charms my heart Those warm, inviting, pools of blue. Each moment lost in dream events Is gained in memories each day Of loving touches, kisses sweet When shadow stepping comes my way. The ghost of you comes resting near To share the swing with shoulder touch I feel the pulsing passing through To reach my heart, that loves so much. We swing to rhythms, silence sought Our minds in tune, two hearts of song We cast away the fear of dark As moon reigns down where she belongs. Softly swinging on wicker strength In clouds, my eyes, are lifted to Leaning back on pillow thoughts My mind remains in thoughts of you. M 8*22*2k |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
A beautiful poem indeed  The imagery is fantastic and well..it's simply beautiful "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
YES, I second the opinion... wonderful images... great work... regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Maureen, softly serene, enjoyed this muchly, I raise my coffee cup in salute! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
JnR4eva well it was a relaxing swing that afternoon...sky was so blue and the clouds floated... ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your poetry flows so beautifully, Maureen...like music ....chanson~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir thank you, I am glad you enjoyed.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
serenity and I salute with decafe...thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Another beautifully written piece of art. I truly love your work and will continue reading them all. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
chanson~ and Susan..thank you both for your very kind words ~~soft smiles Mauren |
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