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Dreams |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Dreams say something we cannot Dreams are deep inside where sometimes we want to hide to fulfil are reality for yet a day. Dreams are the way we would say how we feel but only revealed within our dreams. Dreams seem so real but how could we deal with our dreams that seem to only want us to scheme one more play upon the stage I'm not an actress so I'm a lady of demise so this I'll just do. I'll awake and escape what once I saw knowing I can not act out this scene For which I could not comprise my thoughts in life. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I really love that last part...as well as "I'm not an actress, so I'm a lady in demise..." very cool Rosebud! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Rosebud  I enjoyed the internal rhyme and message!...chanson~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very well written piece of work here... Regards to you Rosebud, Sudhir |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much, sometimes dreams really do seem so real to me in a world where everything seems mellow at times and extreme terror at others, but all in all it's what's inside of us. |
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