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Ante Up! (Local Rebel's Challenge)
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Ante Up! (Local Rebel's Challenge) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Place your bets on this heart To win place or show Ante up your last dime Bet on the dice’s throw Broken dreams littered round A heart that cannot win Gambled on a loving man Lost in a night of sin Shuffle the deck carefully Fold only when you must Dealt a hand of passion Settle for a night of lust [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Shuffle the deck carefully Fold only when you must Dealt a hand of passion Settle for a night of lust --oh my Goddess... between you and Doreen I think you've just about gotten all the men naked... what's left to take off guys??? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sharon... this is GREAT!!!  "Shuffle the deck carefully Fold only when you must Dealt a hand of passion Settle for a night of lust" you've shuffled the deck and have come up with (hehe) a Royal Flush.... nice job! challenge well met, with PASSION... enjoyed this very much! ****** I'm laughing here because i had quoted these lines and was ready to push send, finally did... then i see Mr. LR quoted the same lines (didn't see that before).... i guess there's something to be said about the reality of poetry ... too funny... [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I ante'd everything I had To try to win your heart But, though I gave it everything, I guess I came up short!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You must be flushed with success at this clever little piece. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind replies! 'deer I thought short was only a term you used in golf..such as 'short putt'? I never associate short with YOU!  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
great poem challenge well met |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sharon this is great. Juls |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is the first poem I've read on this particular challenge, and it makes me want to go in now and read them all! LOL This was a really short but saucy piece - I liked the ideas and concepts behind it! Steamy girl, real steamy! **sizzzle** |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew...PdV, you're going to have to move them ALL to Adult after awhile... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I havent even read Rebels challenge but I'm likeing it more and more |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Saucy as vienna sausages....  regards, sudhir |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
deVine, I liked this one. Thought it was great. Read Sudhir's poem on this challenge. I can picture you and Mr. Deer in this one  Garfield |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Whoa - sounds like my kinda game. Yummy! jwesley |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Can't think of a better way to end a game than this way...*g* HUSG |
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