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In The Home Of A Man
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In The Home Of A Man |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374
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Note: I have several light-hearted pieces written from a man's perspective... this is one. Also, from my PukeOutLoud collection. *S* We swung by my place because she had to use the toilet It was starting to rain I grabbed an umbrella from the closet That's when I heard a scream Oh what could it mean Should I check, should I stay Would she be okay I took my chances I decided to wait It was an hour before the movie we wouldn't be late When she opened the door the look in her eyes Made it clear as day and I realized She was in a hurry and the lights were down low It never even occurred to her she just had to go See... she has no brothers always lived with her mother She doesn't understand that in the home of a man... Well... it might be poor etiquette might just be tacky But in the home of a man Ladies... PUT DOWN THE SEAT!!!< !signature--> -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com [This message has been edited by ladysixstring (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Cute I really like this.....form a mans perspective it is funny I am sure.....I too was raised with all girls....so I know what this is like...not used to having to look....  Greta work here...  Julie :) |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
hey very cool... and your "PukeOutLoud" collection? i like that... Tony |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
*cute* nicely written. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL  Just too cool. . . think I'll start my own "Puke Out Loud" collection!!! ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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