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Lean your head back baby, Just Let Go.
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Lean your head back baby, Just Let Go. |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA 
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Just Let Go Stop looking for love like shells in the sand. I'm reaching out baby, just take my hand. Walk into our tide, with me lie down. Feel the surf seep into your pretty white gown. Hot kisses search, tasting salt sweet skin. Let your lips and mind invite me in. Feel the rush of liquid caress your ebb to flow. Close your eyes as it feeds the need below. Let the pull of the waves wash our love to your shore. Touch the sky while hunger leads two bodies fed by need as our sea of yearning swells. Feel me fill you with my flow. Lean your head back baby, just let go. Leave that dress and come to your feet let the water wrap us in a satin sheet. Feel my hands in the fluid of our sea. Forget what momma taught you, get lost in me. Know the velvet slide as our bodies meet, hungry kisses burn me with your white-hot heat. I know the rush of need that pushes our pace as the sunset floods your upturned face. Let the pull of the waves wash our love to your shore. Touch the moon while hunger leads two bodies fed by need as our sea of yearning swells. Feel me fill you with my flow. Lean your head back baby, just let go. With our shudder releasing endings to the wave we kiss each other's souls, getting what we gave. Cause in this swim with feet still touching ground, love can form a sea that lifts without a sound.. Now hang your towel on the wall next to mine. Let's walk together cross that rocky line. When the walls scream and crush you from within come to the water's edge, baby, feel me on your skin. Let the pull of the waves wash our love to your shore. Touch my soul while hunger leads two bodies fed by need as our sea of yearning swells. Feel me fill you with my flow. Lean your head back baby, just let go. Lean your head back baby, let it go. Come with me baby, just let go. copyright Evan Drake 2000 |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
You know this sounds like a song to me...swear there was a tune running through my brain as I read it! It was lovely  "Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling, and instinct, not by rule."~ Samuel Butler ~ |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Incredibly beautiful!! Thank you for this enjoyable night at the beach!  Delicious read!  Gossamerwings |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You definately have a way with words......ohhhhhh my! Rarely am I at a loss as to what to say....but you have definately done that........WOW...Fantastic writing~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I just had a tidal wave...This is remarkably sensual EW...I loved it, and I think it loved me back! |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Tess, I wrote it to music in my head...now if only I wrote music, huh? I'm glad you "heard" it too.... Gossamer...Yes, quite a nice evening at the beach. I'm glad you enjoyed the word tide... Thank you, ladies, Evan |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
WOW!!! This is awesome and I have to agree it would make an excellent song....It really drew me in more and more with each line....Loved it!!!  |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Butterflies... I love your colour and enthusiasm. Thank you reading and letting me know it appeals. *S* serenity, perhaps not a tidal wave, but not the kiddie pool either...laughing...if it loved you back, I actually accomplished something with it. Thank you both!! Evan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hot kisses search, tasting salt sweet skin. Let your lips and mind invite me in. Feel the rush of liquid caress your ebb to flow. Close your eyes as it feeds the need below. Let the pull of the waves wash our love to your shore. Touch the sky while hunger leads two bodies fed by need as our sea of yearning swells. Feel me fill you with my flow. Lean your head back baby, just let go. Leave that dress and come to your feet let the water wrap us in a satin sheet. Feel my hands in the fluid of our sea. Forget what momma taught you, get lost in me. Know the velvet slide as our bodies meet, hungry kisses burn me with your white-hot heat. I know the rush of need that pushes our pace as the sunset floods your upturned face. ========================= this enchanting, exquisite, poem ... has taken both my breath and my words, neither of which do it justice ... exceptional writing, truly. take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep, definitely a tune running through it... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
JulieAnn, charmed by your reaction! Why I haven't been referred to as having done anything "awesome" in a while...laughing warmly here...you sparked my day! Thank you.. Janet Marie, I love knowing which lines I write appeal the most. Thank you very much for the warmth of your response. Take care, Evan With a long held breath given dark freedom, the single flame in sorrow's window flickers out. ~EWD~ |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Thank you, Sunshine...I think there's a tune in your name as well... "You are My Sunshine" is one of my 4 y/o's favourite songs... *S* With a long held breath given dark freedom, the single flame in sorrow's window flickers out. ~EWD~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
TSUNAMI never say never |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
poetic bliss thank you fine writing |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I agree wholeheartedly with Paula ~~sweetly smiling M |
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del shei New Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 6North Carolina |
What have I stumbled upon? THIS is is an exceptional display of "involving the reader". I was there. I think everyone who has read this was there. I always liked the beach, but I will definately recall this poem next time I am seaside. Thanks, EW, for this passionate piece. |
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