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Chasing Moonbeams..dedicated to WhtDove
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Chasing Moonbeams..dedicated to WhtDove |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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This is a result of comments WhtDove and I made in a certain situation and this is my input that agrees with hers. Her brother's wife his sisters spouse another stunning story's out. Another weekend for loving treason and chasing moon beams Another night another room another story set to bloom Another reason for pleasure seeking and chasing moon beams Those old folk tales where love never fails have gone astray from the story line While some remain most have changed but just the future for a time. Another beginning another test another cosy lover's nest another new love is it a true love who's chasing moon beams. He's got big plans she's got hers too another perfect couple two It's time to move up and use that new love chasing moon beams He's late at work she's home disturbed another night alone for her She's lost and hurt now he's leaving her out he's chasing moon beams The mood retires the moonlight lifts another tired night to wish another small small prize a lonely compromise left chasing moon beams. [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Welllll, ET - I guess that ol' work ethic can really stir things up, eh? You worte this poem so well. I sensed the needfulness and expectation for something new, anything new, just as long as its new. Great job! I enjoyed it completely. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nicely put. You shine in your works as you touch on delicate matters as well as heartwrenching ones. You are a pure talent for these eyes to rest. Thank you for sharing so well. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow you have written this perfectly.....always wanting that excitement of something new...am I right??..i hope this was the point you were trying to get across forgive me please if I am wrong....  Great writing...  Julie :) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well guys...Julie Mark and John that's not exactly (but yes it is too) what I had in mind although I know that type of thinking permeates the minds of the world now as a new culture starts to develop again. What I had in mind was that the grass is not greener on the other side of the symbolical mountain and that if you leave a long term relationship that things are never the same. It becomes a new set of standards to adjust to and there is always a new set of problems to cope with. I know how these things go and some of the maturity gained over the years is used to cope with yourself so now you have to remit it to a new relationship and how does it work?? Do I make any sense...please help me WhtDove you are in my corner!! |
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