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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Thoughts swimming in schools Devoured the Sharks of reality Prey daily like Muslims [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep no kidding, it is a marvel in the demands of this world that we here hang onto our creativity......love this ....but....and probably its just me.....but the muslims??? don't get that part.... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ok......*hits her forehead* absolutely rofg...I get it........lolol.....makes the poem even better  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Prey daily...pray daily...hope for the faith to continue on in this craft and be able to recieve small reminders that trip the thinking...very well done!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ROFL... thoughts thwim in thchools? thankth! learned thomething new today!  hehe...this is really great! i once wrote something about pirahnas and their prey which reminds me of this... but yours is so much better!!! the shark imagery makes a much bigger impact than a pirhana... Prey daily, like muslims... ARGHHHH... too funny!!... how do you DO this, btw... you say so much in so few words! i'm a rambler.. wish i had your skills... i envy that ability in a writer... nicely done, rebellious one |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Rebel - you are really, really deep |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
well this bit of honey caught more flies than I expected.... thanxth for the read everyone!! ;-) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow...very deep and with so few words I liked this a lot.... Julie :) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
duh...it's the blonde in me, I sware...took me awhile to get it...very clever Mr. Rebel |
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