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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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See the shifting roll of cerulean seas Waves that lap at changing sands and mists that dress you delicately Laid down ‘pon warmest southern air exhale Upward breaths touch stars, gems lightly hidden ‘neath prism’d dusk wink wink In your hand the Dream perfectly fit, woven to reality Where eyes reflect a look, to match your own *For someone who deserves the real vacation* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great vacation poem...dreamy and smoothly flowing through the images. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Incredible Nic... You've got everything here. The ocean, the sky, and... the dream. The dream... and a pleasant dream this is, dream and all.  I couldn't think of a better vacation m'friend... nope. Hugs you, BOL of em. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
mmmmmmmmmm nice |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is just wonderful. . . I can almost smell the air. . . Where do I sign up?? Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Lovely!! I really like the lines... "In your hand the Dream perfectly fit, woven to reality"< !signature--> -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com Club House: clubs.yahoo.com/clubs/ladysixstring [This message has been edited by ladysixstring (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ Great opening line ... 'See the shifting roll of cerulean seas' A lovely experience .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Neat...I agree with ladysixstring ..'I really like the lines... "In your hand the Dream perfectly fit, woven to reality"...' Enjoyed this. jwesley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Most incredible work, Satiate... regards, sudhir |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Groovy poem.....I wanna go there!!! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
wow... haven't seen you round these parts much -- you're almost as scarce as I... glad to see you here with this one... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Chris ~ s'all about the Dream, m'friend.  Go get yours.. Hugs, bol.Thank you all, for such kind replies.. Margie, glad you enjoyed! LR, As scarce as we are, even still, it's always a pleasure seeing you around. And I'm usually here, just vewy vewy quiet. Thanks to all! N |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Sweetheart~ this was gorgeous! You are a verbal artist and I love it! I was transported there. Thank you ~H |
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