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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
What line is there between trust and innocence, and pure stupidity? What hope is there to find the one that's meant to be, and continue being stepped on? Why do I not have a problem loving you so, but you don't love me back? It's hard to keep my heart from being scarred, and continue walking forward. Why do I fall so hard? Each time I look, I find the good inside of you. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wow!! You really started out both guns blazing with this one and didn't stop even after the body was burried!!! Fantastic opener... "What line is there between trust and innocence, and pure stupidity?" Fantastic all the way!!!< !signature--> -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com [This message has been edited by ladysixstring (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
ladysixstring, I'm gald you liked it. If only I could find the line.... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
my heart has so many scars - it looks like a hockey players face - but a heart that's never open - never feels love fully - I agree with L6S btw - ~G~ |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
this is amazing tulip..how well do i know this situation...u know in a micheal bolton song he says something about how if ur in love then ur lover never makes mistakes....i guess the point is that our love is so deep that the flaws of our loves..just simply never overshadow the best parts of them....but then again it could be that this person may have NO good parts as well..then we should take this poem to the philosophy section LOL...loved the poem and thanx for letting me ramble "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Wilfred and Jnr4, Thanks, I guess I'm just attempting to remain innocent no matter what...I am catching on though!!!! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
hmmm...seems I recall being stuck in the trust and innocence mire when all I was being was stupid...long, long time ago. Your poem is from the heart, tulip. A true test of strength to write it...see, you already know the answers it seems.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
sonjes, I may know the answers, but I still don't like it!!!! |
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