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Why I Am Falling
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Why I Am Falling |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHY I AM FALLING” The loveliness of you touches me, your delicate fingertips, they do too. You give my fearful heart reasons, too fall in love with you. I don’t know when it started, all I know is there are more admirations. I think of you, and feel all of your spells, and my thoughts think of many reasons I wasn’t sure if it was your soft brown hair, flowing down your back with ease. It’s so soft, fragrant, and sexy, when I see it blowing in the breeze. I thought it might be your piercing green eyes, that stared at me, with that emerald hue. I could see them with their kindness, and they exposed the beauty of you. Perhaps it was your soft caring smile, it’s friendly, joyful, and true. And it touches me with your laughter, when my essence listens to you. Maybe it was when you spoke those words, hearing your voice; sensuous, loving, and serene. All the words came out so tender, and they took my heart, as it was all unforeseen. Possibly it was your exciting red lips, when they were warm, and moist on mine. Or perhaps your soft full breasts, touching against my chest sometimes. And then it might have been when we touched, feeling passions that had awaken from the depth. Your body near me so soft and precious, as I held you while we slept. I looked at you and I stared, you are a most beholding sight. To know you in this way, has made my world so very bright. There are feelings stirring inside, not knowing if they will change with time, But just maybe, there will come a day. when we’ll meet each other, sometime. Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good morning, Bill.... This is the most beautiful of all that you have written! It's tenderness reaches out and shows your true feelings. I dearly love this poem, my friend, yes.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
This is simple beautiful. Wow. You are quite the romantic. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Aww shucks Sunny, you make me blush and I have rosy colored cheeks! Thank you for being so kind, and I'm glad that you were able to come by this morning. Hello Mona Lisa, I thank you so very much for your most thoughful comments. And thanks for coming by. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill "I wasn’t sure if it was your soft brown hair, flowing down your back with ease. It’s so soft, fragrant, and sexy, when I see it blowing in the breeze." Oh yes - truly beautiful words. You certainly have a way of writing the most beautiful thoughts and feelings. didi |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
i believe this is my first time reading your work and i must say that it is a pleasure...this poem just bathes in emotion as you have poetically summed up your love....great skill indeed, beautiful write  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi 'didi', Thanks once again for dropping by. You are very gracious with your comments. I thank you very much. Hi JnR4eva, Thank you so much for your heartfelt comments to this writing. I did enjoy writing it. And, thank you for taking the time to come by, and please come again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bill I think this poem is your statement of admiration for a lovely women and you are awaiting a mutual reponse from her...yes..the writing is lovely..lovely..lovely...you certainly know how to appreciate and admire a woman...James |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill...... deep sighing~~~~ beautiful ~~softsmiles Maureen * you always write with such tenderness...  |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Absolutely beautiful. So full of love, warmth, beauty. Such the romantic. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You always bring a touch of romance to my day...thank you so much |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi James, Thank you for coming by, and for your gracious comments. Ahh yes James, a pretty woman, a bottle of wine, a tender kiss. What more can one ask for? Thank you again. MMoonchild Ahh Maureen, always I welcome a comment from you. You are so very kind, and always have a kind word for a writing I have done. Thank you so very much. Hi susanbartee, Thank you for dropping by. And also for your lovely comments. It's deeply appreciated. Hello Paula And thank you for being so gracious. I'm touched to bring that romance to your day. Thank you so much. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, I can't believe I almost missed this poem! Once again you have me made me smile and sigh with your romantic, sweet, loving, and oh so beautiful words. I totally enjoyed this poem and your wonderful writing. rp25 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi rosepetals25, I am very glad that you didn't miss this poem, and that you took the time to stop by. It's nice to know that I can make someone smile, and also sigh. And thank you very much for your kind comments./ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For some reason, I'm very glad she has green eyes... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are a romantic dreamer and it all comes out in your poetry. This is a very tender and loving piece Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, Well, in a way, I'm glad she has green eyes too. By the way, are your eyes green? Hi Elizabeth, I do agree with you, I am a romantic dreamer, but I love it. Thanks so much for coming by and for the kind comments. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bill, there's nothing wrong with being a Romantic dreamer. . . look at me!!! LOL Great poem my friend. . . long live the Romantic dreamer!!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven...yes, I could see the romance in your writing that I read. Thank you for the kinds remarks. And, "Yahoo!" "Long live the romantic dreamers!" Thank you Sven...... |
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