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What Dreams this |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
My power to cope on days of long has forgotten me and left me alone, this day has yet to end its rein on my good graces for what I gave. Tis not what I would call to you my heart, my passion, all of me, though I have nothing as for gold my riches are my words and the way they are spun. My daily bread, is the power of pen that completes my turmoil, thus I begin, for wisdom comes at heart breaking price I wish mine where gone, and nothing would write. For heaven has come and torn away my sanity, serenity and all of my dreams, those that began when I first saw your face thus continue when I think of your carress. All of it memories, to store in my mind all of them sacred, devine in my sight, for which a tear and then more drop away lost into my souls many places, where you still are. I wonder what for, this pain to endure do the gods up above see what we are? Or simply to suffer this pain everyday for the time we had, and what does remain? A kiss, perhaps bring you into my breast collapsing so gently for the peace we have, and lost days that we live, do go away for the hope of a 'morrow we shall have again. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This was completly lovely. "for wisdom comes at heart breaking price" and "for which a tear and then more drop away lost into my souls many places, where you still are." would have to be my favorites here. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
MichaelG, this is lovely,... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This has left me in tears. So filled with sadness and pain yet love and hope. My favorite line is "for the hope of a 'morrow we shall have again".......One should feel with the heart as you do. with every new word I read from you I learn.....I have learnt how to feel with the heart. It indeed has a voice if we would all just listen. Thank You MG As Always Jenn E |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Micheal, "...my heart, my passion, all of me, though I have nothing as for gold my riches are my words and the way they are spun. My daily bread, is the power of pen that completes my turmoil, thus I begin, for wisdom comes at heart breaking price I wish mine where gone, and nothing would write..." "...A kiss, perhaps bring you into my breast collapsing so gently for the peace we have, and lost days that we live, do go away for the hope of a 'morrow we shall have again..." Beautiful writing.. very touching and honest words. Well done.  rp25 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"...for wisdom comes at heart breaking price..." tis true, tis true.....very well said, and written. Enjoyed it much. jwesley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So very sad Michael...it just aches |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful Michael G---I wish only that I could say it so well...love this one... |
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