Open Poetry #9 |
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Paradise |
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Janie Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 158 |
Paradise, a fragile line Separates the world from thoughts of you A beach on a moonlit night A falling cascade to a blue lagoon There, my past beyond reproach All fears and foes cast aside A rampant force drives my heart Beseeches life, in you abides Our union found in Paradise Through seamless truth; understanding Our love bound by endless faith The hands of time withstanding To remain in Paradise The desire in my heart’s wake But I leave you with the image Made to cherish or made to break Psalm 33:15 "He fashions their hearts individually; He considers all their works." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your imagery was awesome...Sensational poetry~ |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
You certainly left me witht the image... thanks. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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