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Open Poetry #9

Re-written

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2000-08-19 06:32 PM

Suddenly euption,
Of words that flow on paper,
Unable to keep them,
I my heart and mind,
suddenly I write,
Just the way I one did,
Everything seems clear,
Now I know what my thoughts are,
Now I write again.

Lies comfort but the truth burns.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-19 11:49 PM

Maria, I have to say, that is how I started writing again too, after a long lapse. It is a sudden eruption. I hope it is bringing you joy.
catalinamoon

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-08-19 11:57 PM

I've been here too..but you said it better! Nice to read you again, Maria.

ladysixstring
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 374

3 posted 2000-08-20 12:04 PM

Well said... I like it!

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-08-20 12:07 PM

I haven't been there yet but I have only been writing for a couple of months and I do not wish for the experience. You have penned this well and I look forward to reading more of your works.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2000-08-20 10:40 AM

thanks everyone. Dont know how long it will last this time but bear with me on it

Lies comfort but the truth burns.

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