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Just Once More
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Just Once More |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just Once More I Love the way Ann touches me softly and tenderly. We're plopped down in a Vietnamese Restaurant in the middle of Chinatown and I'm so intrigued with my sweet Ann seems as if no one else is around. She's gotta be an angel to touch my arm that way. My mouth is eating spring chicken and rice but my heart is totally blown away. It was not an accident that we met last Valentine's day. Candy hearts and roses softened her heart my way. So every now and then we relive those happy times when me and Ann's heart beat as one once upon a time. So gently Ann takes my arm exactly as before and looks right into my eyes as if to beg for more. Then she begins to say those special words I can't wait to hear just once more. "Sweetheart, did you write another of those tender poems for me, those poems I simply adore?" Jameslee@August01,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Very nicely put James. Ann is a lucky lady indeed to have one who cares so much. Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Write for her dude keep em flowin her way!!! If you write like this to her everyday then you will have no problem keeping her around. Your poems come from the heart and it is easy to tell the purity of them. Good read my friend.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
James, my friend, this one is another one ever so honestly written, has pronounced tenderness... lovely! regards, sudhir. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
how can they resist the words of love the passions pen speaking love to them With beauty and tenderness How could anyone say love is not true in light of the words you say in the passionate verse with which you play How could passion die with words eternal and beauty in words calls My love your mine Till our dieing days Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
James, I like the sincerity that you displayed in this piece. Good poem. Nathan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, this poem is aperfect reflexion of you I think. However, remind me again who Anne is?? You are such a Casanova!!!  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very good and very sweet!! I once had a boyfriend who would write me poems a lot.....It was like seeing the sensitive side of him that no one else gets to see.....Ann is lucky to be getting all of these poems from you..... Julie :) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh James ... this one will simply have her swooning ... sweet and so tender! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
aw it brought a smile o sweetness to me face |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I really appreciate all the wonderful remarks...thank you so much. Marina Ann is the woman with the worlds softest thighs...remember... She is only a friend and we go out to eat in China Town or to an occasional movie. I remember when me and Ann watched Magnolia together...a fantastic movie...tender moments we shared. Anyway Cassanova is the guy that steals all my woman...thats why I remain alone...James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, the most succulent ambrosia is no sweeter than your verse. This is wonderful. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Yes!!! Now I remember her James. I was trying to think who she was because I knew the name. Your time is coming my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Claire you sure know how to get a guys attention with just a few words. Your words are like a precious perfume permeating my heart and soul...Thank you...James Marina I sincerely hope a special day is approaching for me...I know love cannot be manipulated it must just happen...meanwhile I must learn to be content with friendships...let it be...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee12345, What a touch you have with your words my friend, what a very nice touch. Glad that I stopped by to read this one of yours. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Bill I sincerely appreciate your response...James |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So gentle and pure with your words as I am sure you are with your heart. Take Care my friend. Jenn E By the way, with a heart like yours, you will not be alone forever. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James I do so love finding something of yours I have never read...this is lovely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Jenn and Paula I appreciate your kind words...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi James...one sweetheart new, and one sweetheart old. You write as a man in love, and I wish you the best. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey James, what a lovely poem.. I once had a guy who wrote poems for me...I carry them in my wallet every day, but I could never tell him how much they meant to me...So he finally gave up one me coz I wasn't responding like he wanted me to... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Bill I am a man in Love...and if I'm not I want to be...so much beauty in this world to admire... Thank you LM and sorry if you missed an opportunity for romance or love...hoping for new ones for you just as lovely...James |
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