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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-08-16 11:57 AM

If you would be mine,
I will take you In my heart,
I will make you mine
And make you happy forever,
If you would com Into my life,
I will give whole life to you,
If,
One day,
You decide to break my heart,
I will remember you a lot,
If you leave me
But If this day will come,
I will pray that
This day won't come,
If this would happened
to one of us,
Pray every night,
And let you go,
If you would be mine,
I will be glad to have you,
I won't be sad,
Like I used to be,
If you promise to be mine forever,
I will be fine
and take you with me,
I will give you
my heart and soul to you,
If this would happen to us,
I willl make you happy forever,
If
This would happen,
If this would......,
If......,

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-08-16 12:03 PM

How many happenings of this world depend upon this single word "If"...
vandana, you have penned another beautiful poem...

regards,
sudhir

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-08-16 05:11 PM

lovely poem Vandana....like Sudhir mentioned how big this word if really is...enjoyable read.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-08-16 05:27 PM

Hello vandana....

           This was a lovely poem and I
     think 'If' is a word overlooked by
     most, but is dear to the heart of a
                    dreamer!
             Beautiful, my friend!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-08-16 09:43 PM

vandana,
you get better with every poem that I read from you. . . this was no exception. . . if only my friend. . . if only. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2000-08-16 09:49 PM

Vandana,
If is the key, with it you must turn the lock. Enjoyed

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

6 posted 2000-08-16 09:54 PM

Very nice Vandana... I enjoyed this one very much. Well written and expressed.

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