Open Poetry #9 |
![]() ![]() |
Truth be Told |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
In Mine Eyes You are there in mine eyes simply stare into mine eyes do not harbor weak goodbyes but look direct into mine eyes simple come you did just that simply go here's your hat. I came clean I told the truth know I'm not a teller's booth here you are no shining star but here I've raised the tell-tale bar. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 16 August, 2000 |
||
© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved | |||
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and if I could add one more line, don't let the door hit you in the....nevermind...is perfect as is...I thank you for this one, Karilea..... |
||
Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful my friend. . . The sadness of a parting. . . well told. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity - well met, my friend, you're welcome! Sven...you're back! |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |