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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-02-25 08:46 AM


Bundles of happiness
Given by god
To spread the joy
Of life on us

Smallest packages
Little feet , hands
Tiny faces
So much love

Parents gleaming
Warmth projected
Outer glow
Shared with all

Smiling, Laughing
Happy faces
Family is formed
Circle of love created



© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-02-25 09:38 AM


This is beautiful, Whiskey!!!
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2 posted 2000-02-25 09:42 AM


Whiskey~ Awww! This is so sweet! Made me think of the day my son was born and all the joy I felt. -SEA
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3 posted 2000-02-25 08:57 PM


Whiskey~
This is absolutely precious.
Most of us can relate to that
'bundle of joy' bring us together
as a family.
Too adorable to pass so quickly.
BACK TO THE TOP for another round.
~*Marge*~


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whiskey
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4 posted 2000-02-25 08:59 PM


Thanks for your replies  
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5 posted 2000-02-26 05:05 AM


This sure brought back some memories.
There`s no greater gift than the gift of a newborn child and the warmth that comes with.
Nice read whiskey

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6 posted 2000-02-26 05:22 AM


You really captured that feeling, that joy that only a child can bring. I love it!
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7 posted 2000-02-26 07:05 AM


Sweet poem! I heard once that babies are bits of stardust blown from the hand of God.
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8 posted 2000-02-26 08:18 AM


A perfect descriptin of a family
Liz

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9 posted 2000-02-26 12:55 PM


Whiskey,
Enjoyed the read it was a delight.

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10 posted 2000-06-25 01:23 AM


a family is truely a gift from God....Nice poem here.....

Julie :)



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