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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Little Bears all in a row Is the picture I see When I think of you Trinkets collected From loved ones You kept them all Eggs of marble Paper cranes All those things We'd make and frame I remember the cuddles You would give When home we would bring The newest creation we'd made Up on the mantle you'd sit it Along with the others before it Treasures in time Our childhood in different forms The kisses we'd get You were so proud You gave us the best start Now out in the world for ourselves Dealing with everyday things I will never forget the love I felt being part of you Mum you are a great friend Over time Ive learnt this But now I know I treasure it so |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Just wonderful, Whisky - it is truthful too.  K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like wonderful memories and a wonderful relationship. James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whiskey what a beautiful poem for your mum here's one I wrote for mine which I think you'd appreciate...tracieA friend is someone who doesn't judge you A friend will always see you through The good, the bad, happy and sad They will always lend a hand Friends make us laugh, show us a good time Their always there to say things are fine Thank god for friends, we all need one And I've got one in you Thanks Mum Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
The best treasures of all are those memories...they only come once and when you can share them....they only get better. Grace to you and your mother Wiskey. You have done a great job with this. There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A wonderful tribute to your mother, Whiskey! Very beautiful!  Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-28-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank God for wonderful mothers, thier praises mean so much to those who are small. Thanks for sharing this! Dennis :^) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whiskey, Wonderful emotions and poem. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Who Rocks? WHISKEY! And that is my final answer Regis. Sincerely though, Very touching. I've been away way too long glad to see your still keeping up the quality you started with! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful! |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
You have a very warm way with words Whiskey. I can tell that you are very close to your Mum and Im sure that she`s a very proud mum to have a loving daughter as you Thank you for the warm read Whiskey |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks everyone I am glad you all enjoyed the poem , thank you forall you kind words |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very sweet poem...it made me think of my Mom seh never throws ANYTHING away......  Julie :) |
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