Open Poetry #6 |
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When the soul soars on wings of love.... |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Hello All, My name is Deepak Menon and I have one volume of English Poetry Published by Minerva Press called Tamam Shudh - Poems of Passion. I have entered the forum for the first time today and hope I shall find the kind of friends I crave here : I am posting a Sonnet I wrote - which I hope you all will like SONNET - SOAR ON GOSSAMER WINGS Beweeping the state of things to come when day ends In stupor when I do lie in fulsome emptiness profound With mind and restless soul draped in sorrows liniments Watching the movements complete the inevitable round And comes into the emptiness a hint of a whisper of voice Deftly, gently, intruding like a needle into sanguine flesh Demanding, insistent, opening new avenues of choice A singing of angel's whispers appearing this stone to bless And hope awakens to lift sorrow's cloak a little while And flickers in the darkness some mysterious light And invisibly a wispy manifestation of innocent guile Opens little windows of sunshine tantalisingly bright Then does soar into the firmament on gossamer wings My awakened soul seeking anew the mystery of things mY wEBPAGE IS : http://mail.indiatimes.com/indiatimes/users/demoninlove |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome, Deepak. You will greatly enjoy being here among friends. Nice poetry. I will visit your web page. Passion's poets welcome you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And now, Deepak, I find you are PUBLISHED! And I received a compliment from you? I am deeply humbled...so perhaps, someday, I may be published too? I may only hope... until then, I will visit your website and see what treasures you have to offer, and from the looks of it, I will be very, very happy indeed! Regards, Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Beautiful sonnet for all to see. The heart that lies within thee. I look forward to reading more posts. From your the your enchanting voice. ![]() Tis a pleasure to see such grace. Thus I welcome your smiling face. ![]() Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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