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Hold me
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Hold me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hold me tight, Don't want this night to end, I want this night to remember, Hold me,kiss me,touch me,love me, Hold me close to you, Love is so sweet, Don't want this night to end, Let's remember to the years, we spent together, Let's hold hands, And hold on to the life we make together, Let's take a deep breathe for awhile, for the next step we take , so hold ,e Tell me, Tell me the thingd we used to say, The night is young, And we can mke very wish upon very star, Hold me tight, Don't let me go, Hold me tight, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very emotion filled expression...we all want to hold on to these precious moments in time. nice work. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very loving title and poem. Glad to see he's finally with you (hehe), so many poems from your pen of him leaving. Hold him and hang on Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
There have been days when more than any thing I just wanted to be held by someone that truly cared for me and was feeling the same exact need to be held by me. James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hold me close don't let go Our love is forever this we know So hold me always, forever more and for always our love will endure Lovely poem Vandana Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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paulsm Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 48 |
Vandana, This brought a tear to my eye, I know this feeling, you tell it well. Thankyou !!! Paulsm |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
very heartfelt words  |
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