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She Knocka Me Out
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She Knocka Me Out |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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The angels colored the view Breathing it in seemed so perfect Then a woman mixed with the hue She was impossible to neglect The scenery couldn't be beautifuller That would not be a word And it couldn't be more beautiful That would be absurd For the angels colored the view The very view she was blocking But what was a poor guy to do She was taking off her stockings That's all there is to the poem I really don't know what happened next sniff… [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL....good one walt  |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Walt, I'm sorry we need to hear more...LOL This is great! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Women still wear stockings??? Yes, let's hear what comes next,Walt! You have a dry wit, I can tell... Corinne |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She probably would knocka you out if she'd known you were watching! LOL. Or maybe she did? *G* I enjoyed this, Walt!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think we're all requesting a sequel to this one Walt!!! hehe Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are a funny one, Walt! Thanks for the much needed laugh!!  Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I love it! Great humor, two enthusiastic thumbs up!  "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifuller, is definately a word cause you just made it one and I like it. Great poem! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
liked this....great poem! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
okokokokokok i shall come up with a sequel but please dont expect an empire strikes back or a second godfather it'll prolly be more like a meatballs 2... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
*Tapping fingers & twiddling thumbs*.... not so patiently awaiting "Act Two"....  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
LOL....that's great.... Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
LOL, where is your mind Walt? Your silly side is something else. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well I forgive you Walt. If I was in your shoes, I'd probably stopped the poem there too. LOL Michael |
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