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The Golden Wish
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The Golden Wish |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Golden Wish I’ve got money in my pocket I’ve got wind upon my sails I’ve got golden rainbow wishes Guiding me on moonlit trails Let the ocean’s sparkling waters Carry me to far off lands I’ve got visions waiting to be Written by my poet hands I will never stop believing In those precious golden dreams At times the hourglass of life Can empty faster than it seems So sail away, my dreamer’s vessel I think love has just begun Let us sail away together Til the hour of rising sun You and I alone in pleasure Drifting on the cresting sea Is it real or just a vision Are you really here with me If this love is just a dream Then dreamer I will always be And I will drift forever on the Golden wish of you and me [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a magical escape, thanks, Elizabeth! Corinne |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Breath taking Liz! I seem to have missed your answers if you answered my questions...but how is your husband doing??? <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You grabed the golden ring on this one. An exquisite poem. Love Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Never stop dreaming my dear friend  Beautiful poem |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A wonderful, uplifting poem, Elizabeth |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is a great line... "At times the hourglass of life can empty faster than it seems". Also, "drift forever on the Golden wish of you and me". Now this is poetry!!!!!!! Danny |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Delightful read, Elizabeth..almost like an old fashioned traveling song! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful wishes, Elizabeth! Denise |
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wave Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 12 |
Elizabeth.. Let me tell you a secret.. To never ever know your lover is love forever Captain |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for your lovely responses and Wave, for your most interesting remark Thanks Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Your poems are always so inspirational and uplifting, Liz...this one certainly deserves to be moved up on "happy Friday". Beautiful words, as always! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A golden dream of a golden wish of a love so warm and true this poem is a golden dream of a wish that warms you through....sweet words about a golden wish a wish we all dream....tracie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm sorry I missed this before. You write so beautifully Liz, I don't want to miss a thing. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
January Flowers, thank you for reading poems that have slipped on through. I appreciate your comments Liz Tracie, I'm glad that a lot of poets are dreamers and can uderstand my poetry. Thank you for the beautiful response Liz Martie, It's very easy to miss poems. Thank yuo for reading and commenting. Will write you soon Liz Liz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Another gem from the hand and heart of a wonderful poet. A joy to read!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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