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tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 2000-02-08 11:15 AM


I kept to myself quietly,
as he was neseld next to me
And I heard him softly whisper to the day~
I have fallen in love again~
This love, I know, will never end~
I can only hope that she can feel this way

My heart sank down in side of me
It was eaten, by the pride in me
I laid there crying quietly to myself
As I turned to look him in the eyes
I could not hold back my cries

My darling ~
Your what I'm living for!

It has been so many years
Filled with passion, filled with tears
Ups and downs in's and out's
But through it all I've had no a doubt
As I've laid beside the man that I adore

Each new day comes with spring
Yes, it is happening!
As I lay beside the man that I adore
We have grown to love each other, even more~

If I had to be stuck..
I'm glad its with you!
23 and counting babe.

I love you,
  Tori



 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-08 11:31 AM


Awwwwww Tori! You summed this up well! You ol stuck gal you! haha...if that poem made ya do it then WOW! hehe  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-02-08 11:47 AM


23 years and still in love, I'd say that says much  
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 2000-02-09 01:59 AM


*tears in my eyes*  This is so beautiful!  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
4 posted 2000-02-09 07:30 AM


Thanks Dove, Hoot and Echo, Yep still feels good after all these years with my gentle "Giant"..lol

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

SEA
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with you
5 posted 2000-02-09 09:27 AM


Tori, 23 years! That's great!! This is wonderful!   -SEA
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