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Just One Kiss
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Just One Kiss |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Just One Kiss ~Marge Tindal~ He breezed out the door. She called him back. Just one kiss before you go. Mom's are like that yeah, they are. I love you son. Now go. She sat waiting for his return, knowing all the while, he was having the best of times it's that way when you're still a child. A child, a teen and somewhere in-between, the bonds of love are forged. A mother knows the reasons for the seasons in your life. That's what mom's are for. She dozed and was awakened with the knocking at the door. The mother in her didn't want to answer. She knew what they were knocking for. With a heavy heart she remembered the last kiss placed on her cheek. As they closed the lid on his life her heart skipped a beat. Wait! just one kiss before you go. She gently placed one on his cheek knowing it would be the last. Mom's are like that yeah, they are. I love you son Now go. *Every day cannot have happy. This is one of those. Remembering my brother and mother. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Marge, this was so heartbreakingly tender. Excellent job. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Marge~ this hit so close to home for me.... my son's are always kissing me or making the sound as they walk out the door... always with I love you mom.. Once upon a nightmare I almost lost them both.. this bought me to the hall way of that emergency room.. Where I looked back and forth at the rooms that they lied in..... and home again to what a lucky mom I am... my heart bleeds for your mom having lost... and for your loss as well If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. A splendid effort. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, I look for your poetry because each one is so special and wonderful to read. This one had the tears running down my cheeks this morning. My son and I have a very special bond - I swear he reads me and I him. I too am so sorry for your family's loss. Your words never fail to move me.  -SEA |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow....wow.....I sit here with chills running up and down...my son is such a daredevil with his life...and I fear this will be my reality....beautiful poem |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my Marge...this one made me cry. How can something so beautifully written be so sad?  Wonderful job with this one. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very moving piece, Marge - moved me to tears, actually. Always remember the good and smile for what was shared with them both. Thank you for a wondeful poem. Michael |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Oh so well said! *hugs* Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
This one hit hard... not from any personal experience, but just in the fact that I'm a father with two young daughters. There is always that fear of the unknown everytime you send them out on their own. Your words were well spoken... a sad piece but worthy of the read. I bow to you and yours. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, this is so beautifully written. It tugs at my heartstrings as I sign off to call my children and check on them. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece. I'm so sorry for your loss. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, thank you for sharing this expression of love with us. You've taken your own pain and reflection and formed it into a beautiful work of art that we can all relate to on some level. This is true "loving" poetry, and I thank you for the gifting. ((((you)))) Claire |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Oh Marge -- my heart just caught in my throat. I cannot imagine the pain, the helplessness -- and I hope I never will. Hugs, hun. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Wow, Marge, this is incredible. I dont know how any mother could endure burying her child. Or Father, for that matter. The pain this poem oozes is chillingly powerful. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, You have an amazing spirit and heart, and you share it with us in such a beautiful way. This is an astouding piece of poetry, and the fact that it is real makes it so meaningful to all of us. Thank you for sharing, Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friends, my friends ... you have held my heart gently in your hands this day. My love and appreciation for each of you for your tender thoughts and the sharing of my painful memory. I am thankful for every year I got to spend with my youngest brother. God, how he filled my heart. The if-only's of life confront us when someone leaves our presence. With Mike's sudden leave-taking we were reminded of the fragile keeping of love, sharing the moment like there may not be another. Hug a loved one and give them that kiss ... while you can. Love, hugs and kisses to you all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You did a beautiful job with a wonderful poem *L* Sy |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was so heartfelt Marge...you captured the emotion well...now look...I feel tears- sniff sniff...just beautiful!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What loving understanding you put into your words Marge and what a beautiful, yet heart breaking poem. I guess you know how your mother felt cause, poets and mothers are like that. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
I kiss my wife goodbye every morning and tell her i love her..thanks for reminding me to never take life for granted...my heart's still in my throat... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh Marge. In all the pain and missing of your loved ones they have truly given you a gift. A gift of love, sharing, and understanding. As I reflect here on your work and what you have written I see that shinning star that is your gift.....a gift in your work that you share here with us all There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Marge I had a feeling at the first verse my heart was gonna break. It did! This is so very sad. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I kept my composure until that last line, then the tears fell....I am going to go wrap my arms around my son right now....beautiful poem, Marge. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
beautiful? Poignant? Heart-rending? All of the above? Yea, and more than I have words to express. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I just don't know what to say Marge. *as a tear rolls down my cheek* All I ask is please never let this be me! |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Intriged by the title, captured by the first stanza and by the forth my heart sank. As a mother, this is my biggest fear. I didn't want to finish reading it, but with tear filled eyes I did. You did an excellent job Marge. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Wow..I'm shaking... This one hit home Marge... Very beautiful... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saxoness- Thank you for your comments. Tori- Bless you for the thoughts. Mike- Always nice to have you reading. SEA- Thank you. Life writes the words, I use to 'move' you. Corazon- I, too, hope it never is a reality for any mother. Hoot- I know that you 'feel' my writing. Michael- Thank you for sharing your feelings. Echo- Thanks, hon. I needed that *hug* Andrew- I'm pleased that you found it worthy. Eloise- If my relating this experience caused you to call and hug your children, then it was well-shared. MeadowMuse- Reflections that can touch someone else need to be shared. Thank you. Skyfyre- Thank you for the hugs. Mistikman- It is a difficult task in life. Elizabeth, my friend- 'Real' is the emotion most found in my inkwell. Thank you for all you say. Seymour- Thank you, my friend. Devina- Remember your tears ... hug someone you love. Martie- I shared my mother's pain ... but I can't imagine the intensity for her. Majestic- Keep the hugs and kisses going. David- You touch my heart with your understanding. WhiteDove- Thank you for your comments. BobbyCat- Hold him tight. Slinger- You expressed it well, my friend. Marilyn- May it never be any mother, is my wish. Shelley- Thank you for your thoughts. Breathe~ *Hugs* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm sorry Marge. This is a very sad and lonely part of our lives. So beautifully written. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ I was perusing the archives of #6 and was pleased to find your response on this poem. Thanking you for your kind and loving heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
Marge, This poem is wonderful! Reminds me of a friend that I have that passed away the day before Mother's Day five years ago. It really hits home! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ My heart was very pleased to see that your first post was on this loving tribute to my brother and my mother. Thank you for your kindness. When I tried to visit your homepage through the link you provided .. it wouldn't take me there ... so I copied and pasted your site into my browser and added the http:// to it. It worked ... you might want to go back in to your profile and add the http:// to the URL address so that others can visit and see your pages. I'm so pleased to meet you. Your Christian following is simply a wonderful thing. I'm going to also e-mail you just in case you don't happen back to read this. Much love and success to you in your endeavors. Sisters in Christ ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 loveya |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
These are the days of remember ... Mike's birth-of-day was June 20th ... the day of his passing is quickly approaching ... July 3rd ... it just doesn't seem fair~ I will cry again the tender tears of a sister who misses the quick smile and soft laughter of a brother who was so loved~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just another *sigh* ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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