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The mountain answered me
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The mountain answered me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The mountain answered me It clearly touches in the sky. This towering mountain reaching high, A granite grey and crowned in white. White clouds round snow of awesome sight. And there I stood beneath its crown The smallest speck of quilted brown. Inspired by the climbing sun. Turning grey to a golds homespun. And humbleness usurp my mood Surrounded me with solitude. Demeaned my space as out of place. This grandeur of heavenly grace. I felt a stranger passing by. Just like a camera, just an eye. Taking in the passing splendor. In the fullness of surrender. So I cupped my hands and screamed hello And I was answered, by the echo. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I could picture each moment of this Seymore  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Hoot, *L* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"In the fullness of surrender" Isn't surrender freeing? You've painted the mountain with the colours of reverance...so graciously expressed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you sweet Meadow *L* Sy |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: Lovely image.. HUGS Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep liked this much...the title says it all....but the images you paint are perfect |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My heart did pound and almost stop While up there on the mountain top The splendor grabbed me in embrace Just as your poems lovely grace Wonderful vision from down here! Love ya Liz |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Good one Sy! Great imagery and rhyme. Fine work as always> fh |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have described this so well, Sy. The thought and the vision so clear and grand. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice one, Sy... You've got no mountains in Florida - I'm sure of it - You been on vacation??? |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Yet another natural wonderment displayed in your writing wonderfully. Thanks for the read this morning! |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
wonderful images! I want to go there.. Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I felt a stranger passing by. Just like a camera, just an eye. Awesome trip, thank you! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sy! yes, thanks for the trip! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
WOW, what a way to capture a moment. This was an excellent read---THANK YOU! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Echo from the mountains in Vancouver that we all love and miss you - so had to post for you today.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Me, too, missing you, Sy  M |
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