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The Last Train To Boston |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Last Train To Boston ~*Marge Tindal*~ I will love you forever or until the sun forgets to announce her wake-up call The moon loses her glow Spring flowers fail to blossom The tree drops her leafs and leaves The river turns upstream flowing no more The mountains have reached their peak The last child laughing ... is the last The bird in silence awaits his song The butterfly stops fluttering The last train to Boston is the last train anywhere ~o~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woo-woo heavy stuff there yuh i like it o course |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
TEACH ME HOW TO DO THIS!!! I am so graphically/presentationally--szat a woid?-- challenged...Aawwwgghh......and oh, yeah? the content? the mirror of your soul! (which is bee-yoo-tee-full!) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wanna'd to ask a quickie is that icq number yuh got there correct??? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
W.O.W.~ Thanks, guy. And yes the ICQ # is correct. For some reason your request for authorization didn't take. But I have added quite a few of the Passion's friends through it. Try again. I'm not on it often as it has a tendency to distract me from my writing. But ... I'll catch up with you one of these times. Serenity~ I will e-mail you with some assistance. LOL at you.  When I write I 'feel' the words so deeply ... they seem to flow. Thanks for liking what I do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hey serenity if you wanna know how marge does those great fonts and graphics with her presentations just click edit on her poem and you can see the html code but you won't be able to jack with the poem not like you would |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walter ..... Go to your room ! I'm going to enjoy EXPLAINING to her through e-mail. LOL ! ~*Teach*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Cool poem Marge, I like the presentation |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mystic~ Thank you sweetheart. I like your style ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Great poem! And, as always, I love your creativity with the images. Wonderful work!!!! Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful Marge , simply Wonderful ..... Your mushy hearted friend, Shannon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now that sure sounds like love to me! Beautiful as always, Marge! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Your mind is a fountain of poetic expression! Do you also sing in the shower???? A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice one, Marge - Last train to Boston, eh??... I tried that.. and here I sit - right outside Boston - waiting for someone else to do the same..  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful images here Marge...do you think trains will ever be obsolete? What about the midnight train to Georgia? Hope not...you are so romatic...great form for this lovely love. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, You are such a clever little thing. Always a new twist, always a different way of holding onto love. You are the genius of passionate's pour, the master artist of poetic love images, with a brand new outlook every day. No wonder everyone is in love with your poetry. Such a clever little Irish Cherokee. Love ya, dear Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ChristiesHeart~ Thank you little sister of soul. Pepper~ We 'mush' together, my friend. Denise~ It is the love season. Spring forth ! Danny~ Indeed I do ! And in the car, the kitchen, the grocery store and even under the sprinkler in the yard ! LOL ! Thanks, fella ! Nan~ Oh, check your tickets. I think you were scheduled for Memphis Station. Martie~ Oh my ... I hope not. The train is a part of our history that I hope always chugs along. I can't imagine our life without those romantic whistle-stops. Elizabeth, my friend~ Thanking you for that more than you could know. Love has to be the greatest elixer of which we partake. And this Irish Cherokee is 'high' on the effects of love's elixer. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well done Marge. I liked the presentation in the form of a marquis diamond. It reminded me of the old Beetles hit.... INclan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INclan~ You are most perceptive. BEATles playing in the background as this one came to mind. Funny how the Karma runs ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You are so talented my friend. Love this!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Coming from you, my friend, I am humbled. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
No offense or anything but tiz BEATles yuh know cuz they got the beat yuh hehehehehe i love that lil joke o theirs but yuh yuh yuh love the beatles so had to say summin |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walter~ Yah .. notised it earlear bute tha durned edit buton throwz me out ever tyme, jist lik hit did thes tyme ... see .... The connection to the server has failed. Account: 'mail.totcon.com', Server: 'mail.totcon.com', Protocol: POP3, Port: 110, Secure(SSL): No, Socket Error: 10060, Error Number: 0x800CCC0E But I am glad you noticed.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Heart stopping as usual Marge...tell me, how is it that I never hear a sad one from you huh?? You are my smile make I'd say!!! XXOO ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Well ... 'never' is a long time coming. Some days it rains the tears but most days are filled with sunshine. Thank you, hon. I'm not the only 'smile-maker' your life .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You just never know what you're gonna find when you go PiP-Archiving~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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