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To Behold Thee |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Two eyes behold thy beauty Two hands I hold in mine Two lips speak love Whisper Sweet Two arms hold me close to you. Bosom to bosom We embrace Two faces reflect The joy we share Two lovers limbs entwine Two hearts beat As one Two souls Drop Anchor In The Night |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was nothing short of breathtaking!!!! Such romance...sigh...I remember vaguely what that's like!!!lol Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is beautiful, your love sounds delightful. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"Two souls drop anchor in the night"....Oh, I do love that line....lovely , dreamy poem  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I must echo Hoot Owl...I loved that line, as well. This is a superb piece of writing, Septsong. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Thank you for your comments. I thought maybe this one would get booted over into Adult Forum, guess there must be a fine line somewhere. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how lovely!! This is such a beautiful poem, but I do think it's in the wrong place. It should be in a publication. Good work, Septsong Liz |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Romantic and beautiful. Exellent work, Septsong, I really love this. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeptSong~ Gosh ! This is lovely. 'Two souls Drop Anchor In The Night' What a lovely thought. Wonderfully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Septsong, beautiful romantic poem, I really loved the ending, its hot. Parker |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Simply lovely! |
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