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| Open Poetry #6 |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
"Not" I have no idea the reasons why And all I do is sit and cry For so long my friend was here Deeded trust his strong shoulders bare Did he in return, not find it there? Could it be I took for granted This one with winded wings Who flew into my life And bought to me the finer things? Now my mind has twisted in tangle Was there something I did wrong that caused friendship to mangle? I always thought this was so, a friendship that could only grow For all of time he's in my heart, for there he own's a special part Its not his nature to stay away With out a reason for his delay Please God, give some kind of clue On what it is we're going through Even if the skies look gray, let his words come pouring out my way I ask of You to take my hand And help me Reach to the soul of this man Help with answers in his darken plight I'm here for him . And ALL is Right Give me a turn to lend an ear All that echo's I will hear I beg you Lord to take control Ease the pain within our soul's And if he's out there listening in Please let him know that "I need him!" And if it is, our way's must part Forever he shall hold my heart But never will I comprehend Life with out my dearest friend Tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tori~ with tears running down my face, "But never will I comprehend Life without my dearest friend" echos through my heart. After this morning I now read this and hurt all over again. I keep trying to choke it back. My New year's resolution was to stop writting him and his wife and hope to hear from them. I am weak I guess. I hate feeling like I'm begging for friendship. I love your poem.-SEA |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Tori- Beautiful cry for a friend. Just beautiful. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Sea I do know how you feel.. a little like my right hand dosent know what the left is doing.. I hope things get better soon for both of us... Thanks JF! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad and so beautiful, Tori. I sure hope things work out for you two. Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori, this tugs at the heartstrings. Girl what's up? Like I can't guess from the poem! You know I'm here if you need to talk girlfriend! Sniff, sniff... <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Denise and Dove, I'lll be talking to ya gir.. real soon.. sniff sniff. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes those closest to us think they'll hurt us more by telling us their feelings than not... Not so - dealing with truth is far better than dealing with the unknown... Well put, my friend..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori~ This is hauntingly sad. Hopefully he will surface to let you know where he stands. No friendship is worth forgetting for sure. *HUGS* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice poem  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Tori, what a poem you created It certainly made my eyes wet I hope that your friend is still there Never knowing if a poem is based on true events, current or past, makes it difficult not to run over to you and to hug you real bad. HUGS The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
WOW!...I have chills... I hope this man finds his way back to you...soon... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words and support! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
What a wonderful poem It makes me smile to think of my dearest friends. And how true, your closing line! I love it |
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Glorfindel Junior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 22Auckland, New Zealand |
I think you need a big one of these: **HUGS**now smile and have a laugh with a friend an I hope you feel better for it, but don't even think about stopping writing!! just too damn good at it. Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse, My love shal live everyoung in my verse. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
They are words from the heart One Who! Glorfindel your hug was right on time... I thank you !! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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