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| Open Poetry #6 |
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nonsense New Member
since 2000-02-20
Posts 8 |
Alone Far in the ocean, a single rock lay. No trees, no land, nothing to see. Only the dark blue waters, and the black gloomy sky. Lonely and sad on this rock I stand Blank is my mind, just trying to understand. The roaring winds stirring up a storm. All alone, as I watch it form. The more frightened I get. The waters begin to turn evil, Crashing waves upon my rock. The longer I stand, the weaker I get. I'm becoming cold and drenching wet. Each gusting wind, knocking me down. I know not what to do? I have nowhere to turn to. The storms getting worse, I pray this is no curse. I don't know how much longer I can stand, Stand on my rock and not understand. I'm lost and lonely, not wanting to be without you. Whatever will I do? Do I stand on my rock until the storm ends, Or do I jump in, and pray for all of my sins. By: Nichole |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Your poem truly portrays the sadness you feel. Please, don't jump. I look forward to reading more of your poems, Nichole. Keep posting, and I will keep reading. Welcome to Passions. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Welcome nonsence, Congratulations on a good first posting. Yes, the best poetry comes from the heart. Keep up the good work. I too, look forward to reading more of your work. INclan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. I feel the intensity here. Look forward to reading more from you. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very beautifully done Nicole. Welcome to passions. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi nonsence, Water can be very deceptive, Soothing and yet a killer.Very nice poem, remember you are standing on a rock (symbolic of your wisdom)and that wisdom will help pull you through. Cerenity-1 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well, I have a different Rock that I stand on in times of trouble or uncertainty. That ROCK is Jesus! Very intense poem... <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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nonsense New Member
since 2000-02-20
Posts 8 |
Thanks all! I appreciate the response's! I wrote this in 94, so I did not jump, thank goodness, and the good lord and my faith kept me from it!! Thanks again!! Nichole |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Wonderful poem  With that talent, you will be very welcome here at passions. Hope to read another |
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