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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Liberate me from the chains of your love; So I may free my soul, be Reborn And locate the remnants of Me. My universal place lies dormant Beyond my grasp;buried beneath the years. My gifts are hidden deep within Coursing through my veins and struggling To overcome the menial duties of life. I am not whole in your restricting embrace. Peace escapes me at every turn; Contentment is no longer my goal. Release me so I may be vital again; To mend the remnants of Me. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions. Please check your email for a special welcome....I like your work and look forward to reading more.. |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
I truly loved this poem. Very sad, but a lot of things tend to hold us back. Those things are just masked in the face of fears that slowly release us, but not all at once. Well written. Chris Blue Moon |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Beautifully written piece. Welcome to Passions. Hope to read more of your work in the future. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very thought provoking poem. I enjoyed the read. Welcome to Passions.  |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Thank you for the kind welcome to such a fabulous site. All of you inspire me to grow as a writer, as well as an individual. I continue to read in awe at the great talent featured here. Thank you all for sharing your intimate thoughts. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice work, sonjes - Let's see some more of your good stuff... Passions welcomes you!!..  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sonjes, I too carry those same thoughts alot, I,m glad to know I'm not alone. Welcome to Passions Cerenity-1 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sonjes~  to the lovely home of tender-hearted poets. This was just the loveliest of entries. Enjoy your stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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nonsense New Member
since 2000-02-20
Posts 8 |
Beautiful...I like this alot. Look forward to see more of your work! Nichole |
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