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Alone Beside Himself
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Alone Beside Himself The slender shadows cast upon sunbaked pavement a silhouette of a man alone beside himself. His stride graciously slow arms swinging harmoniously lips whistling a rhythmic tune. I watched from concrete stairs wondering what brings happiness floating freely through a man alone beside himself. |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This is great! Words so descriptive, its like seeing a painting. Great detail. Excellent! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Shelley: Thank You so much, I was not sure about this, almost did not post it. I appreciate your your review, made me feel better. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Gloria, what a wonderful poem ! I always like to "watch" people and wonder why they behave as they do. This describes they very well.  Glad you posted it to share.  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Munda: Thank You, years ago we used to have this guy who would come whistling up the street and say hi, he was just so happy, and I was reminising and this came from it. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I often wonder about other people and their lives beyond my sight...I love this! Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Love it...just love it.. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gloria, discovering why that man is happening is discovering the true nature of life. Happiness does indeed come from within. |
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