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Still Holding You
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Still Holding You |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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“Still Holding You” I just may be crazy, I may be deranged- As my mind wanders back, sometimes memories change They are so realistic, too bad they aren’t true.. In them I am happy, and still holding you. Still holding you, as we walk arm in arm- Still holding you, hypnotized by your charms... The band is still playing some song of romance- I’m still holding you in my arms as we dance. In my mind you still love me, Those words were not said- We never discovered, our affections were dead... And we never said, the final, “We’re through”! If I’m dreaming, don’t wake me. I’m still holding you. Visit My Home Page http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'll reply quietly, as not to wake you...just popping in to say that this is lovely GS...We all still have our dreams don't we???? A dream this good isn't worth giving up m'friend!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Who said we were through? I'm still here Lovely poem Love ya Liz |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Gunslinger, this is a departure from your usual writing. Well done! Looking forward to the next "tales of the ole west" saga from you. Danny |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Saddening story, Gunslinger, wonderfully told. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes dreams are so much more wonderful than reality. This is heartbreaking!! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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