Open Poetry #6 |
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Never Be |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
She lies awake at night With the radio on, And smiles a sweet smile During her favorite song Her classmates think she’s smart And must study all the time So they don’t bother with her In high school cliques, it would be a crime They missed out on a true friend Funny, loyal, a shoulder to lean on There was a time when all were equal But those times are long gone She has to go through the motions Hidden tears soon become a river As she spends nights in her room Painting different faces in the mirror He lies awake at night With his radio on, And stares at walls for answers During the same favorite song Everyone loves him for his looks But it’s a game he doesn’t play A little too much sensitivity He has to hide to get through the day Popularity is relative To how bad you want it And he tosses and turns, but Just can’t put his finger on it He thinks of her and doesn’t know why But, in his heart he thinks he does The only one who really knows him But it just can’t be; only just because |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
OH MY GOD . this one has brought tears to my eyes . overwhelming deja-vu . ![]() |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
THANKS. How is everything in England? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML, with every poem, you hold my heart in your hands. Thanks for being so gentle. ![]() |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow....thanks for that SEA. Now that makes me blush. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML, you are most welcome! Everyone needs to blush now and again! ![]() |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
never let that feeling slip away through your fingers. I liked this poem, took me back to highschool. Nice work. Looking for more....Much love, One love, PEACE |
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