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CMGrimm
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0 posted 2000-02-17 11:01 AM


She Smiled....

A cute little hello smile, just smothered in shyness and hopefully attraction.


She smiled....

It started at the center of her mouth and turned upwards to form a perfect semi-circle of sweetness.


She smiled....

My heart fluttered as my eyes locked onto hers.


She smiled....

And my dumb-ass forgot to smile back!!!!

Christopher M. Grimm


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

© Copyright 2000 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 2000-02-17 11:12 AM


LOL, great poem
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2000-02-17 11:14 AM


funny yuh to be sure but mite watch the cussin they strict round here o yuh
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-02-17 12:58 PM


ROFL
SEA
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4 posted 2000-02-17 01:27 PM


Too Funny!   -SEA
January Flowers
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5 posted 2000-02-17 01:32 PM


HAHAHA!
What a smile it must have been!
still, HAHAHA!

Michael
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6 posted 2000-02-17 02:46 PM


Nothing warms me more than a sweet smile, CM.  Unfortunately I usually forget to smile back too...LOL  


Michael

Marilyn
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7 posted 2000-02-17 04:12 PM


Thankyou you for that smile. I truely needed it today.  
CMGrimm
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8 posted 2000-02-17 05:00 PM


Smiles are contagious aren't they.

Thanks everyone for reading and responding.

Chris

Beki
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9 posted 2000-02-17 05:45 PM


ON the floor with Hoot! LOL! Damn! Don't we all have such missed opportunity stories!
Nan
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10 posted 2000-02-18 07:38 PM


...and so - if she were to smile again - what would you do??? Just curious...
sonjes
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11 posted 2000-02-18 11:04 PM


A smile really does say a lot of things, doesn't it?  Perhaps, that particular smile rendered you speechless? : )
Liked it!

CMGrimm
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12 posted 2000-02-18 11:36 PM


Thanks everyone for the sweet replies....you've all made my day.

Chris.

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 2000-02-18 11:43 PM


Great ending to an all too real situation
I like your style and I like to laugh
Liz

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14 posted 2004-05-21 03:04 AM


cute
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