Open Poetry #6 |
She Smiled...... |
CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
She Smiled.... A cute little hello smile, just smothered in shyness and hopefully attraction. She smiled.... It started at the center of her mouth and turned upwards to form a perfect semi-circle of sweetness. She smiled.... My heart fluttered as my eyes locked onto hers. She smiled.... And my dumb-ass forgot to smile back!!!! Christopher M. Grimm Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
LOL, great poem |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
funny yuh to be sure but mite watch the cussin they strict round here o yuh |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Too Funny! -SEA |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
HAHAHA! What a smile it must have been! still, HAHAHA! |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nothing warms me more than a sweet smile, CM. Unfortunately I usually forget to smile back too...LOL Michael |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Thankyou you for that smile. I truely needed it today. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Smiles are contagious aren't they. Thanks everyone for reading and responding. Chris |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ON the floor with Hoot! LOL! Damn! Don't we all have such missed opportunity stories! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and so - if she were to smile again - what would you do??? Just curious... |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
A smile really does say a lot of things, doesn't it? Perhaps, that particular smile rendered you speechless? : ) Liked it! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks everyone for the sweet replies....you've all made my day. Chris. Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great ending to an all too real situation I like your style and I like to laugh Liz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute |
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