When you think you have it, but you don't

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Open Poetry #6

When you think you have it, but you don't

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 2000-02-17 01:51 AM

Expectations
of dream like states
I see the dream
but miss the place.

I play the game
of give and take
but through it all
you've won the stakes.

I see the chance
we had before
But somehow, somewhere,
I closed the door.

mete out
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-02-17 05:27 AM

This poem speaks volumes to me...I am constantly reaching out for something and letting my arm drop.
I look forward to reading more of you work.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I se it.

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

2 posted 2000-02-17 09:02 PM

Thank you, Mete!

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

3 posted 2000-02-17 11:36 PM

Tulip-
You have that dreaded "closing door syndrome" too?
Enjoyed your poetic verse.

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