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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Like a portrait by Picasso, or a landscape by Van Gogh, Like that famous chapel ceiling, done by Michelangelo, Like Botticelli's Venus, emerging from the sea, Like the smiling Mona Lisa, You're like a case of Bud to me! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Intoxicating sentiment, to be sure. Meadowmuse |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... who could ever ask for more??? LOL. I love it, sweetie... This case of Bud has shore missed yore sweet self!!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Toe, I like your style, but I prefer Molson. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!! I love this. "You're like a case of Bud to me!" That has to be the BEST description of love that I have ever heard. Thanks for a good read. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome back, my toe tied friend. Sweet poem, too! Bud? Huh! Like a case of Dom Perignon, my fair Don Juan. Corinne |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Good one Toe. Please never send this to my wife, she'll be your's for sure. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
But Corinne?...That high priced champagne had too many syllables...so does Molson and Fosters....and I could just hear Balladeer now.......thanks for the kind responses you talented folks....I see we have alotta new names?.... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You NEVER cease to amaze me Mr. Toe!!!! I'm sure you've captured many a hearts with this one!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Good point, Toe, the syllables...the readers might not have known if you said: Like a case of Dom, either! This bud's for you, bud. Cor [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Toe, has anyone ever told you how romantic you are?!Cans or bottles honey?!  -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe what excellent rhyme you come up with! LOL like a case of Bud...weis...er! LOL <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one is classic Toe! Hillarious! Denise |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
This poem suits you Toe, your wittiness, charm, and down right Funniness! lol  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
It's all in the perception, dear Toe! ROFL This is a certain smiler. Nice to see your antics have arrived again. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Oh, if only I could find a man to write ME such beautiful sentiments... good job< !signature-->"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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Vincent VanGogh New Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 9somewhere in France or Italy (me thinks) |
Now you realize you have to share any beer you get for using my name in your pome...LOL Vinny< !signature--> Only someone I held true and dear, Would I ever lend an ear. [This message has been edited by Vincent VanGogh (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful and expressive Toerag but the ending could use a little work. May I suggest the last line...your sweeter than a case of bud to me. James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Actually gang, I'm getting better?..I used to say unrolling an ounce of Columbian reefer was like undressing a beautiful woman....Yassee? I'm doing much better.....it took 25 years, but I am improving? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Improving on perfection, hunh? *G* Better watch out for that Vincent guy, sweets... that case will become a 6 pack in a hurry! LOL |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
How could you possibly get any better, Toe? I already told you - you da man! Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
ROFLMAO...hehehe You are too much 'ol Toe!  I see you feel the same as I do at times....Love to me, is like....oh....er....never mind. I am censoring myself here and now! hehe This rocks my heart! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe, you are too cute! Is that possible? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Justin Kase a can might be'er work of art... Ever tried to build one o' them there pyramid sculptures out of 'em??? Lordy, they can git soooooo tall y've gotta step right on yer Toes ta reach.... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
i think i'm in luv...(hic-burp!) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You get more romantic every day, Toe. This one melts my heart You sure do know women! Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, we all have our visions of loveliness and one could do worse than a case of Bud, for sure. (as long as you drop the WISER) Good romantic poem, silver tongue |
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