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A Well-Worn Smile
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A Well-Worn Smile |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Well-Worn Smile ~Marge Tindal~ I'll caress you with a verse of love when it sighs. Hug you with a look, sent through green eyes. Love you with a heart that loves the love I'm in. Send you a well-worn smile that tells you where I've been. Always I'll remember the loves that I've known, loves that have stayed and loves that have gone. Love that returns time after time. Love that belongs in this heart of mine. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
That heart of yours A wonderous prize When viewed by all Of our own eyes A gift you have And give so well In tales of poetry You tell A caring heart From which words flow We need only read And then we know Absolutely beautiful poem  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A well worn smile is a sight for sore eyes...lovely poem, Marge Claire |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Always I'll remember the loves I have known". Wonderful line! I doubt any of us forget the loves we have known. So glad they were there, even though they didn't stay. They helped mold us into the the kind of person we are, I believe. Marge, you are so gracious and complimentary of the work of others. I have never met you but I know you heart; so big and pure. Even though I may not reply to all you poems, know that I read each and every one. Danny |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ What a wonderful little poetic response. Smiles are fun to see and fun to give. Thank you for yours. Claire~ I understand that. May you give and get many well-worn smiles, my friend. Danny~ My goodness, what with the way we are growing it would be difficult to reply to all. But, I'm giving it the old college try. Just knowing you read them is enough for me. I'm glad you liked this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I know there is a candle in this heart of yours with my name on it. Well done Marge , and sorry for this short reply, but I'm late and have to fly So I call this the "Loving fly by reply" How is that? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
You amaze me...Bravo! That is all I have to say...I've quite simply run out of compliments...you have totally DEPLETED my supply! Can I have a lock of hair? *grin* Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Marge.... I love the word always... "always I will remember" That one line touched me deeply. Thank you. B Gravitt |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, this is wonderful, I can really relate to .... Always I'll remember the loves that I've known, loves that have stayed and loves that have gone. -------------------------- this is me, for sure. and Loves that have gone.. yes thats me for sure. sigh! Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut~ The candle in my heart burns brightly for you my friend. Love the 'fly-by' bye-bye. Breathe~ LOL ! I'm betting you haven't depleted your supply ! Thank you, gal. (L`Oreal Blonde) Denise~ Amazing lady, you are. Thank you for all the encouragement you give all of us on our poetry. Betty~ So nice to see you. You've been missed by this lady. Thank you, Betty~. I agree ... always and forever .... love just fits with those words. If I touched you ... I'm pleased. Parker~ Funny man ! You are wonderful. Thanks for the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've summed up my life with this one Marge... so true, so true, that which you speak with simply a smile!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
A heart like yours is hard to find it has that warm touch of real mankind reaching out to give a bear hug to everyone and all the many other wonderous things you've done. A smile than tops off your overflowing gifted personality as you share with all here at Passions your beautiful sentimentality. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"Loves you with a heart That loves the love I'm in" That's your favorite line, right, Marge? I know it is. We have a connection.....and it's mine. Wonderful words...... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you, my friend will never run out of lovely love---you have a life time supply. Wonderful poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little Devina~ Guess I just plumb didn't see your reply in here. You KNOW I wouldn't overlook your sweet self intentionally. You've got such a lovely smile ! LostDreamer~ Thank you sooooooo much for your reply. You've got me pegged right with that SENTIMENTAL stuff. I plead guilty. And I love it. Just as I love you. Aren't we all just a bunch of smiles ! My Balladeer~ Awww ! You're so sweet. Of course you're right. And of course you're in mine. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge What a beautiful piece I can't see your eyes, but I most certainly see your heart and know that it's just as beautiful as this poem you've written LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ You just keep sneaking in ... little shadow ... Love you with a well-worn heart. Tracie~ Trust me ... they are sparkling green lit with specks of friendship. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Justin Kace Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 82Oz |
I have to agree with Balladeer - That's a wonderful line.... for an equally wonderful poem..  |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marge, I see the years and all the tears etched between the lines and all the love from heaven above kept safe for better times. Thanx Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Justin Kace~ Why thank you so much. INclan~ So much said in just a smile, huh? Lovely response. Thank you. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I've been gone for a day or so, and have so much to catch up on~ Of course I always look for your poems first, Marge  This is beautiful, as always~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ Thanks,hon. Glad you're back. Lots of wonderful poetry from everyone in here for you to catch up on. WHEW ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, Most unfortunate problem. I seem to be in the same place... can't forget a single thing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ How nice to see your smiling face. Glad you 'remember' to come here and visit once in a while. My love to you and Rosemary. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How very sweet! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ I'm pleased you enjoyed. Seen any beautiful lighthouses lately? Seems that some of the visitors where I work are coming in with the loveliest jackets and sweatshirts done with famous lighthouses all over them. I thought of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, you know that I'm a sucker for a good love poem, and this is one of the best! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Curled up the corners of my lips with this one Marge ... you amaze me Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little LoveBug~ Is that piano music I hear in the background? LOL ! I guess we're all 'suckers' for a decent expression of love. Count me in ! Thank you, sweetie. Rex~ I see you 'almost' breaking into that grin. Glad I could cause it to happen.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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