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Why I Cry
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Why I Cry |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
My heart explodes like footprints on a vacant path, when my yesterday collides with my now, making you question my tears, reject my pain. Because I cannot paint a portrait of my self-esteem, laying in the pit of a snake's belly, you believe that I am selfish, jealous, and wihout faith. Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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firefly New Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 3Central NJ |
To Christie// This was wonderful and sooo true. I can relate to the raw emotions. keep up the good work. |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Christies, Anyone that can spread so much love around here in Passion,CAN`T be selfish. How about you climb on my horse  and we ride off into the sunset and put all our worries aside. Just trying to Cheer ya up a lil. Nice writing.Thank you for sharing  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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firefly New Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 3Central NJ |
How have you been anyway Christie??? [This message has been edited by firefly (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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firefly New Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 3Central NJ |
hey...how come my icons didn't work??? |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Firefly..I have been good MOM how about you? From your message I take it you knew a guy who liked to say "bloody hell too" Wiz...Thanks so much for the sweet reply. I tried to submit this before. But did something wrong!! Anyway, you did cheer me up!  The last time I attempted to ride a horse anywhere I was 11 years old and it took off into the woods where I was lost for hours. Later, my "Dad" found me and was very angry that the prized horse was missing for so long. This is true..but was a good predictor for things to come as well.  Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
this is very powerful in its meaning |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Hoot..thanks. I really wrote this years ago, but posted it now because its meaning revisited me the other day! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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