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The Hand That I've Been Dealt
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The Hand That I've Been Dealt |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Hand That I've Been Dealt I know what fate awaits me The fields I have to plow But it's not written in the stars Nor etched upon my brow I know the hand that I've been dealt What God assigned my name But this does not consume my mind Nor flow within my vein For I have love within my heart And peace within my soul And these are treasures greater Than what vision was fortold My fate melts with the springtime snows And flows down every stream I can only live the moment I can only live the dream Elizabeth Santos |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great, it is one half of an arguement that I have with myself...the other half is why do I accept this...why? maybe my search should be for the peace in my heart...as yours comes through so clearly that the reading of this makes you feel a bit more peaceful.....sigh |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful as always Elizabeth. . . This is where I am right now in my life. . . we wish that things didn't have to be the way that they are, but it's not up to us. . . we don't get to choose. . . we can only live for today. . .as you have said. . . Thank you my friend. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz, You are difinitely in touch with your muse. This poem flowed so smoothly, and carried its theme consistently throught the each verse. Nicely written! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, as always, Elizabeth!  Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Do you have any of that peace to spare? *S* This is beautiful, Elizabeth! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Liz, this is great! I'm trying to learn how to take it day by day and stop worrying so much about tomorrow. (I'm a professional worrier)  -SEA |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Splendid effort. I enjoyed the poem very much. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To be at peace with each moment is to have learned wisdom. Lovely Poem Liz! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
simply beautiful Liz, of course I expected no less!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In light of all - beautiful and courageous! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, Beautiful!!! as all your poems are!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I loved your poem  )~Any more along the same topic you want to share? Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
"I can only live the moment, I can only live the dream." Awesome lines! Words to live by throughout this poem! Corinne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all so very much for your very kind responses to this poem. I appreciate them all.Yes, cuddles , I have posted a couple of poems kind of like this one. Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, An excellent poem, exquisitely done. Love Sy |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Liz, You have been greatly blessed! I know several people who have gone to their graves without ever having peace or love! Whatever else you've been handed, you've been given the greatest gift. May God bless you always! Your poem besides being written especially well is also very touching! Bless you friend! Bev |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I'm trying so hard to get where you are, what a beautiful way to express it....thanks, it really helps |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- You are in touch with a very powerful entity ... this is splendid. Your spirit is at peace and that is something many strive to attain and fall short. God bless you, for you have played your hand well. What a lovely poem of reassurance and vision. Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz when you put pen to paper your words just seem to flow! They jump right from the page and just grab ya! Most excellent writing! The peace from God is the only true peace there is! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your beautiful comments, and your compliments. So sweet Liz |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Liz ya done another, Poem so very well, As in all the others, The stories ya have to tell. We've all been dealt our hands, To which our fates will be, (Of course if you're a Toerag, Ya keep an ace right up your sleeve). [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 02-08-2000).] |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Liz~ with out the beauty of your flow in this verse, I live and dream each moment by your words.. Applause~Applause~Applause~and then some! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Toe, Yeh, I know what you mean, so do I. I told you we're two of a kind Thanks, dear Liz Tori, very sweet words, Thank you for reading Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Liz, WoW, beautiful poem! My only usualy question though is why have I been dealt this hand and an I fold and be dealt a new one, but I guess I am stuck with this one, so I must make the best of it! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Liz...you have one of the most positive outlooks of anyone I have ever encountered. I know you've been dealt a hand that most wouldn't bet on in a lifetime, but if I had to place my bets...they'd all be on you. You are an inspiration to many and a good force in this world where we need all the good we can get. Hugs Ruth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Echo, It's not what cards you have been dealt, but how you play them. Good luck in your new endeavors Liz Hoot, I don't even know what to say to your beautiful response, except a humble thank you. It seems to me that I am the one who has been inspired in this environment, and for that I am truly blessed Thank you for your very kind words Love ya LIz |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Liz - You're not only in touch with your muse, you're in touch with your innermost being - and the priorities in life... Nicely done...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks, Nan, that's what poetry does, it exposes your inner self. I appreciate your remark. You're very kind Liz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oh Liz!! This is wonderful....you do have a wonderful combination of wisdom and peace within you!! I think this poem is a beautiful portrayal of the words "Carpe Diem". I really enjoyed this one too!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful outlook |
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