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Goodbyes |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Goodbyes You said you loved me then you said goodbye As one more magic moment reached its end. Alone and saddened, left to wonder why This heart so broken tends to slowly mend. Goodbyes are only anchors of despair For one who finds his freedom in your smiles. Your absence leaves me destitute and bare And starving for a sample of your wiles. Eternities as empty seconds spent As time becomes a mystic mystery, Restored when loneliness at last relents And brings with you the end to misery. Such overwhelming magnitude of loss To never know when next our paths may cross. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another wonderful sonnet, David! Denise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Mournful Here -- Lovely, David, and again you are flowing your words wonderfully. netswan |
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Ella Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 20 |
This is beautiful, touching!!! I loved it. You have a great flow happening with your words. Cat wait to read more! Ella |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh, David... You're gonna get me writing more sonnets.... This is great!!..  |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
David2 - Wonderful imagery in this poem! I especially like these lines: "Eternities as empty seconds spent As time becomes a mystic mystery, Restored when loneliness at last relents And brings with you the end to misery." Excellent writing!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Eternities as empty seconds spent As time becomes a mystic mystery A very touching poem... Thank you for sharing... Smiles2uPoetFriendDavid2 *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Missing you and the beauty of your penning~ THANK GOODNESS for the archives where we can find poets from the past who are no longer here~ Hoping that life has been good to you and that perhaps someday you will return to leave us another beauty~ Happy holidays my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I know this pain |
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