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redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-04-16 08:02 PM

There is a black bird
with just one wing.
He used to walk
to my house
and sing.
I can't help
but hear those
songs again.

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

1 posted 2000-04-16 08:17 PM

Welcome to Passions, my friend! This is beautiful - so much feeling in so few lines! It takes me back to a loving sorrowful place of memory ...

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

2 posted 2000-04-16 08:19 PM

thank you so much,
i will be sure to read your poetry, i am so pleased to have found such a constructive place to write,
thank you again,
redheart angrybraids

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2000-04-16 08:54 PM

Hi there and welcome!!

This is a beautiful little poem you have here.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Lone Ranger
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil

4 posted 2000-04-16 09:01 PM

I thought it wasn't possible to resume so many feelings in so few lines!
great work , wonderful first post!!

"Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

5 posted 2000-04-16 10:54 PM

Redheart! Welcome to Passions.
What an amazing poem. - Short, sweet
and to the point. Lovely

netswan

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

6 posted 2000-04-16 11:10 PM

Thank ya'll so much,
I hope the input is this good
when I start writing more
incomprehendible poems.
Please say how you really feel,
I'm open to cuntructive criticism.
Thank you all for posting and replying, I will be sure to post at your poems as well.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-02-17 05:26 PM

RedHeartAngryBraids~
And into our hearts you walked this day~
Please return to the nest ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-07-30 03:02 AM

Enjoyed your poem Redheart...James

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-08-03 11:25 PM

very clearly set scene, very clearly stated emotions

and all these in a few lines, i liked!(since i have a soft spot for short poems)

please post more often, redheart...

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

10 posted 2001-08-11 04:33 PM

thank you all kindly,
i wrote this poem so long ago,
it resembles by dad,
the crow fellow that he is.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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