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Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil

0 posted 2000-04-16 02:08 PM



                   Doubts                  

What do we do?
When there is no one
No one to help you get through
They are all gone

In the most unlikely place
I find what I was looking for
But since it's mine yet
I keep looking for more

Why do people lie to me?
When all I wanted was a friend
Maybe my heart wanted more
Than just a simply normal end

I keep on searching
For a new reason to live
I love so many people
And my poetry is all I can give

© Copyright 2000 Pietro - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-04-16 02:14 PM


Lone Ranger,
Good writing.  Very thought provoking.  I loved the last stanza especially.  Giving your poetry is like giving a piece of yourself....very valuable indeed.  Hope you find what you are looking for.  If you need a friend, feel free to e-mail me.  Best wishes to you!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
2 posted 2000-04-16 02:32 PM


Lone Wolf
Glad you liked it , and you're completely
right about giving poetry!
and be sure that I'll e-mail you!

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